聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the response more natural and concise. Begin with a direct topic sentence, limit to 2–3 short sentences, and avoid overstatements. Add one specific detail about how you chat to enrich the answer and use a linking word if needed.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, both in person and online. For example, we often video-call on weekends to catch up, which helps me feel connected because I’m quite outgoing.

建议: Respond directly with a clear topic sentence and provide specific examples. Use linking words to organise your ideas and correct grammar (e.g., say “we talk about” not “I have usually talked”). Avoid implying gossip overly; instead mention varied topics.

示例: We usually talk about our daily lives and recent events. For instance, we discuss work or school updates, weekend plans, and sometimes share funny stories about things people in our group have done.

建议: Start with a clear preference sentence and give a brief reason using linking words. Use more appropriate vocabulary (e.g., “gossip” instead of “murmuring”) and avoid informal fillers like “kinda.”

示例: It depends on the topic; generally I prefer a group when the subject is light or fun because it’s more lively. However, I choose a one-on-one chat for private matters because it’s more confidential and focused.

建议: Give a concise preference with a clear reason and a positive example. Correct grammar and clarify the concern about screenshots. Use a linking word like “because” or “however” to connect ideas.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more sincere and reduces the risk of messages being shared out of context. For example, when discussing sensitive issues I find meeting in person safer than texting.

建议: Answer directly with a topic sentence and provide a brief reason or example. Fix grammar (e.g., “I don’t usually argue” and “I don’t like arguing or being disrespectful”). Keep it concise and natural.

示例: I don’t usually argue with my friends because we try to resolve disagreements calmly. For instance, if we have different opinions about plans, we talk it through and compromise rather than arguing.

× Yes indeed I do like chatting with my friends in real life or even online platform.

✓ Yes, indeed I like chatting with my friends in real life or on online platforms.

The sentence uses an unnecessary auxiliary 'do' for emphasis; simple present 'I like' is correct for habits. Also 'online platform' should be plural or 'an online platform' and use preposition 'on' for platforms. Suggestion: use 'I like' for habitual actions and 'on online platforms' for correct preposition and number.

× I am a talkative person and extroverted.

✓ I am a talkative and extroverted person.

Adjective order and sentence structure are awkward. Adjectives modifying a noun should be before it and coordinated: 'talkative and extroverted person.' This improves fluency and grammar.

× I couldn't be alone without my friends because I will definitely be depressed.

✓ I couldn't be alone without my friends because I would definitely be depressed.

The sentence mixes modal past 'couldn't' with future 'will.' Use consistent modality: 'couldn't' with 'would' to indicate hypothetical or conditional feeling. Use 'would' for potential emotional outcome.

× What I have usually talked with my friends is definitely about chit chatting others people secret or what have they done lately so it will become a new topic about their daily stuff in our friend group.

✓ What I usually talk about with my friends is definitely chit-chatting other people's secrets or what they have done lately, so it becomes a new topic about their daily lives in our friend group.

Multiple issues: use simple present 'I usually talk' for habitual action (present tense issue), 'chit-chatting' needs hyphenation and gerund form, possessive 'other people's secrets' required, question word order 'what they have done' should be declarative, and 'daily lives' is correct plural. The corrected sentence uses present tense for habits and correct noun forms.

× Depends on the topic that I wanted to talk.

✓ It depends on the topic I want to talk about.

Missing subject 'It' and tense mismatch: 'wanted' (past) should be present 'want' for current preference. Also include preposition 'about' at the end for completeness.

× If it's murmuring about other people, I would like to chat in a friend group.

✓ If it's gossip about other people, I would like to chat in a friend group.

'Murmuring' is not the correct noun for informal talk about others; 'gossip' fits better. Pronoun use is acceptable but word choice improved. Also 'in a friend group' is okay but 'with a group of friends' is more natural.

× But if it's kinda secret stuff that I couldn't tell everyone, I would rather choose to talk alone with my friend.

✓ But if it's kind of a secret that I can't tell everyone, I would rather talk one-on-one with my friend.

Use 'can't' not 'couldn't' for present ability; 'kinda' is informal—use 'kind of'; 'talk alone with my friend' is better as 'talk one-on-one with my friend' for clarity. Modal consistency matters.

× I'd prefer both but if I really have to choose I think face to face is more beneficial because if I have speak something that's not that good they could capture the screen and send it to other person and I could get in trouble.

✓ I'd prefer both, but if I really have to choose, I think face-to-face is more beneficial because if I say something inappropriate online, someone could capture the screen and send it to others, and I could get in trouble.

Fix punctuation and compound sentence flow. Use 'say' rather than 'have speak'; 'face-to-face' needs hyphens; 'inappropriate' more natural than 'not that good'; 'someone' and 'others' correct pronouns; maintain conditional modal 'could' consistently.

× I do not usually get in trouble with others because I am a natural person that didn't get out in a lot of trouble.

✓ I do not usually get into trouble with others because I am a calm person who does not get into a lot of trouble.

'Get in trouble' usually 'get into trouble.' 'Natural person' is unclear; 'calm' or 'easygoing' fits. Tense 'didn't get out in a lot of trouble' is incorrect; use present 'does not get into a lot of trouble.' Also use relative pronoun 'who' for people.

× I do not like to argue or disrespecting others.

✓ I do not like to argue or to disrespect others.

Parallel structure required: 'to argue or to disrespect' or use gerunds 'arguing or disrespecting.' Original mixed infinitive and gerund. Using infinitives makes the sentence parallel and grammatical.