聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Correct verb forms and possessives, and avoid repetition.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it cheers me up and helps me relax. For example, when I’m stressed about work, talking with a close friend helps me feel calmer and gives me practical advice.

建议: Clearly state the main topics and give one specific example. Use correct sentence structure and subject-verb agreement. Avoid vague references like “it” and unfinished clauses.

示例: I usually talk about my job and daily life with my friends. For instance, we often discuss projects at work and share tips on managing busy schedules.

建议: Give a direct preference sentence, then explain briefly with a specific reason. Fix grammar (verb forms, articles) and avoid repeating words.

示例: I prefer chatting one-on-one because I feel more comfortable sharing personal feelings privately. In a group I’m less likely to open up, so one friend is enough for deep conversations.

建议: Answer directly, then support with a clear, relevant example. Improve fluency by removing hesitations and completing the example. Use correct grammar and sentence flow.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can convey emotions more clearly. For example, when a friend who lives in Nagoya visits, we talk in person so we can express support through tone and body language.

建议: Provide a direct answer and give a brief, coherent reason or example related to arguments. Avoid off-topic or incomplete examples and improve sentence completeness.

示例: No, I rarely argue with friends because we try to resolve issues calmly. For example, when we disagree about plans, we discuss and compromise instead of fighting.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because I feel more excited and I feel I can relieve my feelings and my friends helps me always.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because I feel more excited, I feel I can relieve my feelings, and my friends help me always.

The verb 'helps' is incorrect because the subject 'my friends' is plural and requires the base form 'help' (subject-verb agreement). Also minor punctuation improvements separate clauses for clarity. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs (no -s) and use commas to join related clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× I usually chat about it, my work or. With my friends, yeah. Because my friends doesn't know my.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about my work and personal matters because my friends don't know everything about me.

Original contains fragmented sentences and wrong pronoun and verb forms. 'Chat about it, my work or.' is incomplete; combine ideas into one sentence. 'Doesn't' is wrong with plural 'friends'—should be 'don't'. 'Know my' is missing an object; use 'know everything about me' or 'know me well'. Suggestion: form complete sentences, ensure verb matches subject number, and include appropriate objects for verbs. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I don't like chat with group of people because I don't talk my feelings to people in Group group.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I don't like chatting with groups of people; I don't talk about my feelings in groups.

Problems: 'chat' should be gerund 'chatting' after 'like', 'group of people' needs plural 'groups of people' or 'a group of people', and repetition 'Group group' is redundant. Also 'talk my feelings' needs preposition 'about' and object placement. Suggestion: use gerunds after 'like', pluralize where appropriate, and include 'about' for 'talk about feelings'. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I like to communicate face to face because I want to give my feelings directly to my friends. For example, when my friends, my uh, lives in Nagoya, but I sometimes.

✓ I like to communicate face to face because I want to express my feelings directly to my friends. For example, when a friend of mine lives in Nagoya, I sometimes ...

Problems: 'give my feelings' is unnatural; use 'express my feelings' or 'share my feelings'. 'When my friends, my uh, lives in Nagoya' mixes singular/plural and punctuation; correct form: 'when a friend of mine lives in Nagoya' or 'when my friend lives in Nagoya'. Sentence trailing 'but I sometimes.' is incomplete—finish thought. Suggestion: use appropriate prepositions ('of mine') and complete the clause. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× No, I don't, because I don't want to argue with my friends. For example, I went to Park Navya in January. My friends.

✓ No, I don't, because I don't want to argue with my friends. For example, I went to Park Navya in January with my friends.

The fragment 'My friends.' is incomplete; combine it with the previous sentence to indicate who accompanied the speaker. Use 'with my friends' to show accompaniment. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments by including subject and verb or attaching the fragment to the previous sentence. Grammar problem type ID: 26