聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời nên tự nhiên và ngắn gọn hơn; sửa ngữ pháp (I do → I do/I do like; my friend → my friends) và tránh lỗi từ vựng. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm một chi tiết hỗ trợ ngắn. Ví dụ: "Yes, I do. I usually chat with my friends every day to keep in touch and share little updates."

示例: Yes, I do. I usually chat with my friends every day to keep in touch and share little updates.

建议: Cần sửa ngữ pháp số nhiều (my friend → my friends; story → stories) và làm cụ thể hơn bằng ví dụ. Dùng liên từ để nối ý và đưa chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: school, work, hobbies). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

示例: I usually chat with my friends about daily life and funny stories. For example, we talk about school or work and share amusing things that happened during the day.

建议: Thiếu trợ động từ (prefer to chat) và có thể khiến câu rõ ràng hơn bằng cách nêu lý do cụ thể. Sử dụng linking word để kết nối lý do (because/so). Giữ câu ngắn, tối đa 3 câu.

示例: I prefer to chat with just one friend because we can talk about many things in depth and understand each other better.

建议: Cần sửa cấu trúc và ngữ pháp (communicate via social media; I am not confident). Nên giải thích ngắn gọn lý do và có thể thêm một ví dụ về khi nào dùng mạng xã hội. Tránh lỗi từ và dùng collocation đúng (not confident, feel shy).

示例: I prefer to communicate via social media because I'm shy when speaking face to face, so I feel more comfortable texting or messaging.

建议: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ (we understand each other very well; I don't want to hurt each other). Thêm một lý do cụ thể hoặc ví dụ ngắn về cách giải quyết mâu thuẫn để câu giàu nội dung hơn. Giữ 1–2 câu bổ sung.

示例: No, I don't. We understand each other very well, and even if we disagree, we try to talk calmly so no one gets hurt.

× That's I do, I usually chat with my friend every day.

✓ That's what I do; I usually chat with my friends every day.

The student used 'That's I do' which is incorrect; use 'That's what I do' to refer back to the question. 'My friend' suggests one friend; context implies chatting with friends in general, so use the plural 'my friends' or keep 'my friend' if they mean one specific friend. Also use a semicolon or period to separate sentences. Suggestion: say 'That's what I do. I usually chat with my friends every day.'

× I usually chat with my friend about daily life and funny story.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about daily life and funny stories.

The student used singular 'my friend' and singular 'funny story' where plural forms are expected for habitual actions. Use 'my friends' and 'funny stories' to match the habitual, general meaning. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general, repeated activities.

× I prefer chat with only one friend because we talk about many things and understand each other better.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because we talk about many things and understand each other better.

After 'prefer' the base verb should be followed by 'to' before the infinitive: 'prefer to chat'. Omitting 'to' is nonstandard in this construction. Suggestion: use 'prefer to + verb' for clarity: 'I prefer to chat...'.

× I prefer to communicate to via social media because I'm shy when speaking face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because I'm shy when speaking face to face.

The phrase 'communicate to via' contains an extra preposition 'to'. The correct preposition is 'via social media' or 'through social media'. Suggestion: remove 'to' and use 'via' or 'through'.

× I cannot confident.

✓ I cannot be confident.

'Confident' is an adjective and requires a linking verb, e.g. 'be'. The student omitted 'be'. Alternatively, use the adverb 'confidently' with a different structure. Suggestion: say 'I cannot be confident' or 'I don't feel confident.'

× No I don't because we very understand each other and I don't want hurt each other.

✓ No, I don't because we understand each other very well and I don't want to hurt each other.

Word order and adverb placement are incorrect: place 'very well' after the verb phrase 'understand each other'. Also add 'to' before 'hurt' and include a comma after 'No'. Suggestion: use 'understand each other very well' and 'I don't want to hurt each other.'