聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (e.g. 'I'm not extroverted', 'conversations'), and give one specific reason or brief example. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because I'm quite introverted and find online conversations less stressful than face-to-face meetings. For example, I can take my time to think before replying, which makes me feel more relaxed.

建议: Improve sentence structure and provide specific topics. Use linking words (for example, 'usually' and 'also') and correct tense/grammar ('how our days went', 'what I'm doing now'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and give a concrete example.

示例: We usually talk about how our days went and what we're doing at the moment. I also discuss plans for the future and sometimes share Instagram reels about career ideas or funny moments.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and a concise reason, avoid unclear phrases like 'previously said'. Improve grammar ('I'm not extroverted', 'my best friend'). Limit to 2–3 sentences and add a brief example or consequence.

示例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I feel more comfortable sharing personal details with someone I trust. For instance, I usually call my best friend at night to tell them about my day.

建议: Clarify meaning and correct word choice ('more comfortable' not 'more confident'; 'with those people'). Give a specific reason and an example of how social media helps (e.g. time to think, convenience). Keep it concise and coherent with a linking word.

示例: I prefer communicating via social media because it's more comfortable and convenient; I can take time to compose my messages. For example, I often explain complicated ideas in chat where I can edit my words before sending.

建议: Start with a clear statement, correct grammar and punctuation, and give a short specific example. Use linking words ('however', 'for example') and avoid writing direct, unclear reported speech. Keep answer to 2–3 sentences.

示例: Not often, but sometimes we argue about studies. For example, I got upset when my best friend forgot an assignment deadline, so I reminded her to write dates in her notebook or set calendar alerts next time.

× Yes, I like chatting because I'm not extrovert so I do not like face to face conservations.

✓ Yes, I like chatting because I'm not extroverted, so I do not like face-to-face conversations.

The adjective 'extrovert' should be 'extroverted' or the noun 'an extrovert'. 'face to face' needs hyphens when used as a compound adjective before a noun: 'face-to-face'. 'conservations' is a misspelling; correct word is 'conversations'. Use commas to separate clauses for clarity.

× I like chatting.

✓ I like chatting.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Keep simple present 'like' to express a habitual preference.

× I feel more comfortable when I do chatting with my friends.

✓ I feel more comfortable when I chat with my friends.

After 'do' we normally use the base verb, not the -ing form. Better phrasing is either 'do chatting' (uncommon) or simply 'chat'. Use 'when I chat' to indicate the habitual action.

× I usually chat about with my friend about how was days gone and what I do now, what I should do and I also shared some reels on Instagram about our futures and present.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about how our days have been, what I am doing now, what I should do, and I also share some reels on Instagram about our present and future.

Remove the redundant 'about' after 'chat'; use plural 'friends' if speaking generally. 'how was days gone' is incorrect word order and tense; use 'how our days have been'. Use present continuous 'I am doing' for current actions and modal 'should' with base verb 'do'. 'shared' should be 'share' to match habitual present. Order 'present and future' is more natural. Also use commas to separate list items.

× Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

✓ Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with just one friend?

Original is mostly correct but 'only one friend' is awkward; 'just one friend' is more natural. No plural/singular error but wording improved for naturalness.

× I prefer to do chat with only one friend.

✓ I prefer to chat with just one friend.

Use 'prefer to' + base verb 'chat' rather than 'do chat'. 'just one friend' is more natural than 'only one friend'.

× Previously said.

✓ As I said before.

'Previously said' is not a natural standalone phrase. Use 'As I said before' to refer back to a prior statement. Adds subject and preposition for a complete phrase.

× I am not extrovert so I only share my all day story to my only one best friend, not all.

✓ I am not extroverted, so I only share my whole day's activities with my one best friend, not with everyone.

Use 'extroverted' as adjective. 'all day story' should be 'whole day's activities' or 'my day'. 'share ... to' should be 'share ... with'. 'only one best friend' is awkward; 'my one best friend' or 'my best friend' is better. Clarify 'not all' to 'not with everyone'.

× I prefer to meet through social media because it is more confident and I can easily communicate with that people and they make up my thoughts clearly.

✓ I prefer to meet through social media because it feels safer, I can easily communicate with people there, and they help me clarify my thoughts.

'More confident' is incorrect to describe a situation; use 'safer' or 'more comfortable'. 'communicate with that people' is wrong: use 'people there' or 'those people'. 'make up my thoughts clearly' is unclear; use 'help me clarify my thoughts'. Maintain present tense consistently.

× Not at all, but sometimes and I argue with my best friend on the topic of study, sometimes she does not remember about the date when we have to submit the assignments and I also then I argue with my friend Why you not no date on your notebook or any mobile?

✓ Not often, but sometimes I argue with my best friend about our studies. Sometimes she does not remember the date when we have to submit assignments, and then I ask her, 'Why did you not note the date in your notebook or on your phone?'

Original has multiple issues: adverb placement and sentence structure. Use 'Not often' or 'Not at all' consistently. 'Argue with ... on the topic of study' should be 'argue ... about our studies'. 'does not remember about the date' should be 'does not remember the date'. Use past simple 'did not note' for a specific past action. 'no date' is incorrect; use 'note the date'. 'any mobile' should be 'your phone' or 'a phone'. Break into shorter sentences and use proper question form and punctuation.