聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a clear topic sentence, organize ideas into 2–3 concise supporting points, use linking words and correct grammar. Avoid repetition and use specific examples or reasons. Aim for 2–4 sentences, e.g. state you enjoy chatting, explain why (emotional support, daily updates), and give a brief example.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and stay connected. For example, we often share how our day went and talk about problems so we can give each other advice. This makes our friendship closer and more supportive.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence describing main topics, use linking words (for example, besides, also), and provide specific examples. Keep sentences grammatically correct and concise. Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases.

示例: I usually talk about our goals and studies. For example, we discuss our plans for university or careers, share study tips, and give each other suggestions on how to improve. Sometimes we also compare our personal experiences to help set realistic goals.

建议: Begin with a direct preference sentence (both, but depending on context). Use linking words (however, because) and give concise reasons and an example. Correct grammar (singular/plural, tenses) and avoid fragmented phrases.

示例: I prefer both, depending on the situation. For example, I enjoy group chats when we just want to have fun and share jokes, but I prefer one-on-one conversations when I need to discuss something serious or personal.

建议: State a clear preference (or say you like both) and give specific reasons with linking words (however, although, because). Correct sentence structure and avoid vague phrases. Provide a short example of when you use each mode.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication for important conversations because it feels more personal and clearer. However, I usually use social media to stay in touch daily or to ask quick questions, for example when I need study advice and my friend is not nearby.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence about whether you argue, then explain reasons and how you resolve conflicts with concise, grammatically correct sentences. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) and avoid confusing or contradictory phrasing.

示例: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends because we disagree on decisions or behaviour. However, we usually talk things through calmly and give each other advice so we can find a solution and keep the friendship strong.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends because it's a very great moment and also share also everyone share our feelings, our talks, what I do in the day and the whatever activity that do and some issues and some problems to relate their feelings. It's a very fabulous time which are with friends.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because it's a great time when everyone shares our feelings, talks about what we did during the day and other activities, and discusses problems and personal issues. It's a fabulous time spent with friends.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun use ('everyone share our' should be 'everyone shares' or 'we share'), subject-verb agreement, and awkward relative clause ('which are with friends'). Use consistent first-person plural ('we') or third-person singular with correct verb forms. Reorganize clauses for clarity and use 'spent with friends' for natural expression.

× It was like I chat about with my friends recently as I compared my story to what about in the goal, what about your future and also related to the study, What are Jews? I study in the future and my friends are suggest me to uh, how to how to.

✓ Recently I talked with my friends about my story, our goals and future plans, and about studies. I asked what I should study in the future, and my friends suggested some options to me.

Original uses incorrect verb forms ('I chat', 'are suggest me') and wrong question phrase ('What are Jews?'). Use past tense 'talked' for recent past and the correct phrase 'my friends suggested (to) me' or 'suggested some options to me'. Remove unclear or irrelevant words and restructure for coherence.

× Yes, I prefer both of them which are dependent on association, because in the front time I prefer group chatting is a very funny moment and also all friends are very jokes. Jokes time. But in the serious time I I prefer to chat with my one friend.

✓ Yes, I prefer both, depending on the situation. At first, I prefer group chatting because it's fun and friends make a lot of jokes. But for serious matters, I prefer to chat with one friend.

Pronoun and determiner errors ('both of them which are dependent on association') and awkward phrases ('all friends are very jokes'). Use 'depending on the situation' and 'one friend' instead of 'my one friend'. Clarify sequence: 'At first' -> 'in casual situations' better.

× Yes I preferable help them communicate to face to face and social media because many time friends are communicated face to face. But is there any chance? But usually I chat with friends in social media to shares over problems and how to solve it usually.

✓ I prefer both face-to-face communication and social media because friends often meet in person. However, usually I chat with friends on social media to share problems and discuss how to solve them.

Incorrect adjective/adverb use ('I preferable help them') and wrong prepositions ('communicate to face to face'). Use 'I prefer' and 'on social media'. Change 'shares over problems' to 'share problems' and ensure plural agreement ('discuss how to solve them').

× Yes I argue with my friends because friends are not every time right is rare chances he's made a bad decision for our but I teach to go on the right path and friendship is only one relationship to abuse their friends and he's not angry for you.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because they are not always right and may make bad decisions. I try to help them make better choices. Friendship does not mean abusing friends, and they should not be angry with you for helping them.

Tense and pronoun errors ('are not every time right', 'he's made', 'for our') and incorrect word choice ('abuse their friends'). Use present simple with adverbs of frequency ('sometimes', 'not always'), correct pronouns ('they'), and clearer expressions ('help them make better choices'). Separate into clear sentences for coherence.