聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear and natural but slightly informal (“besties”). To improve, use an appropriate word choice and expand with one supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends because it helps me relax and feel happy. For example, talking with them after a long day helps me unwind and get a different perspective on my problems.

建议: Your main idea is relevant but grammar and cohesion need work. Use a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and linking words to organise supporting details. Be more specific about topics. Limit to 2–3 short sentences.

示例: We usually talk about our future plans and our studies because we are training to be translators. For instance, we discuss career options and share study tips so that we can motivate and support one another.

建议: Fillers like “uh” reduce fluency and some grammar is incorrect (e.g., “keen on chat”). Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid fillers, and add a short reason with a linking word. Use correct verb forms and vocabulary.

示例: I prefer talking one-on-one because it feels more comfortable and private. Also, it is easier to get detailed information or advice from a single friend than in a group chat.

建议: The answer conveys an idea but is unclear and has grammar and vocabulary issues (“sense structure”, repetition, mispronounced words). Explain the reason clearly using simple language and one linking phrase. Correct repetition and use “express my opinion” properly.

示例: I prefer communicating through social media because I find it easier to organise my thoughts online. For example, writing messages lets me think before I reply, so I can explain my opinions more clearly.

建议: Good direct answer and reasoning, but wording is awkward (“solve it by integration”, “lose our value”). Use clearer, natural expressions and a linking word. Give a brief example if possible.

示例: No, I rarely argue with my friends because we prefer to solve problems through discussion and compromise. For example, if we disagree about plans, we talk calmly and find a solution that suits everyone.

× I enjoy chatting with my besties because it's more comfortable and joyful.

✓ I enjoy chatting with my besties because it is more comfortable and joyful.

No grammar error of -ing form here; change 'it's' to 'it is' is optional for formality. However this sentence is acceptable. Keep as 'chatting' because 'enjoy' requires a verb+ing. Suggestion: no change needed.

× I always chat with my friends about our future life and about study because we study as a translator and we want give inspiration with each other and want we want support each other to continue our lesson.

✓ I always chat with my friends about our future lives and about our studies because we are studying to become translators and we want to give inspiration to each other and support each other to continue our lessons.

Multiple issues: 'future life' should be plural 'future lives' (singular/plural); 'about study' should be 'about our studies' (article/word form); 'we study as a translator' incorrect verb tense and singular/plural and role expression — use 'we are studying to become translators' (present continuous for current activity and correct plural); 'we want give' missing infinitive marker 'to' (verb+to infinitive); 'give inspiration with each other' incorrect preposition, use 'to each other'; 'want we want support each other' duplication and word order — simplify to 'and support each other'; 'continue our lesson' plural 'lessons'. Suggestions: use present continuous for ongoing study, plural nouns for multiple people, include 'to' before verbs of purpose, and use 'to each other' for reciprocal actions.

× Uh, to be honest, I am really keen on chat with only one friend because it's more comfortable than uh, sending message on chat and uh, uh, it's easier to take information from friends about anything.

✓ Uh, to be honest, I am really keen on chatting with only one friend because it is more comfortable than sending messages in chat, and it is easier to get information from friends about anything.

'keen on' requires a verb+ing ('chat' should be 'chatting') — maps to verb+ -ing error. Also 'sending message' needs plural 'messages'; 'on chat' is better as 'in chat' or 'in the chat' (preposition); 'take information' is unnatural — use 'get information'. Suggestions: use gerund after 'keen on', pluralize countable nouns, choose appropriate prepositions ('in'), and use natural collocations like 'get information'.

× I like communicating through social media because when I have communication face to face I have problem with my sense structure.

✓ I like communicating through social media because when I communicate face to face I have a problem with my sensory structure.

'have communication' is unnatural; use 'communicate' (verb) or 'have communication with' (but simpler 'communicate'); missing article 'a' before 'problem' (article error); 'sense structure' is unclear — likely 'sensory system' or 'sense of structure' but literal correction: 'sensory structure'. Suggest using clear noun 'sensory system' if intended, and include definite/indefinite articles as needed.

× So when I communicate with with people through social media I can express my opin, my opinion and my thoughts.

✓ So when I communicate with people through social media I can express my opinion and my thoughts.

Repeated 'with' is a duplication error; 'opin' is a typo for 'opinion'. Preposition 'with people through social media' is fine once duplicated removed. Suggest proofreading to avoid duplication and typos.

× No, I have never argued with my friends because when we have problem we try to solve it by integration and we avoid arguing with each other because when we argue we might lose our value.

✓ No, I have never argued with my friends because when we have a problem we try to solve it by talking it through and we avoid arguing with each other because when we argue we might lose our respect for each other.

Missing article 'a' before 'problem' (article error); 'solve it by integration' is unnatural — probably means 'solve it by talking it through' or 'by discussion' (word choice/adjective). 'Lose our value' is unclear; more natural is 'lose our respect for each other' or 'damage our relationship'. Tense 'have never argued' is fine (present perfect). Suggestions: add articles where needed, choose idiomatic phrases like 'talking it through' and 'respect for each other'.