聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise, correct grammar, and provide a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Avoid redundancy and limit to 2–3 sentences. Use linking words if you add details.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay close to them. For example, we often send emojis, short videos and small gifts through social apps to keep the conversation fun.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence and then give specific examples. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use linking words (for example, such as) to organise supporting details.

示例: We usually talk about current trends and share funny video clips. For example, we send Instagram reels, exchange emojis and sometimes buy small gifts for each other.

建议: Give a direct answer first, then explain briefly with specific reasons. Reduce hesitations and correct article/noun forms. Keep to at most three sentences.

示例: I like both, but it depends on the situation. I prefer one-on-one chats with my best friend or partner for personal topics, while I enjoy group chats with other friends because they are lively and fun.

建议: Answer clearly and use correct comparative forms. Give one or two specific reasons and use linking words (because, so) to connect ideas. Avoid repetition and filler sounds.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is easier to express thoughts and read body language. For instance, in person I can quickly clarify misunderstandings, which is harder over social media.

建议: Be direct and concise: state whether you argue and give a clear reason or example. Remove repeats and hesitations. Use linking words like because or sometimes to structure the answer.

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when I disagree with their actions or decisions. For example, I once argued with a friend because they repeatedly canceled plans at the last minute, which I found disrespectful.

× Yeah, I love to chat with my friends all the free time and I like to send their them emojis and the gifts and send reels and all the things.

✓ Yeah, I love chatting with my friends in my free time, and I like sending them emojis, gifts, reels, and other things.

Use gerunds after 'love' and 'like' when describing general habits (verb + -ing form). 'All the free time' is incorrect; use 'in my free time'. 'Their them' is redundant; use the object pronoun 'them'. List items need commas for clarity.

× We mostly shared the funny video clips, gifts and emojis exchanges, uh, in the today's trend, like, uh, on Instagram, there are a lot of reels trend trending. So we exchange that once.

✓ We mostly share funny video clips, exchange gifts and emojis, and follow current trends. On Instagram there are a lot of trending reels, so we exchange those sometimes.

The student is describing habitual actions, so present simple ('share', 'exchange') is appropriate rather than past tense 'shared'. 'Emojis exchanges' should be 'exchange emojis' or 'exchange of emojis'. 'In the today's trend' is incorrect; use 'current trends' or 'today's trends'. 'Reels trend trending' is redundant; use 'trending reels'. 'Once' is unclear; 'sometimes' fits better.

× Actually I like both. If I am talking to my girlfriend or my best friend, I prefer to do alone.

✓ Actually I like both. If I am talking to my girlfriend or my best friend, I prefer to talk alone with them.

Pronoun and verb choices are incorrect: 'do alone' is unnatural; use 'talk alone' or 'talk one-on-one'. Also include an object pronoun ('with them') to clarify who you are talking alone with.

× But uh, in all my other friends, old friends, I prefer to do in Group.

✓ But with my other, older friends, I prefer to be in group chats.

Use 'with' to indicate people you are with, not 'in my friends'. 'Old friends' should be 'older friends' if comparing. 'Do in Group' is ungrammatical; use 'be in group chats' or 'chat in groups'.

× There are a lot of fun in Group chats.

✓ There is a lot of fun in group chats.

'A lot of fun' is treated as uncountable, so use singular verb 'is'. Capitalization: 'Group' should be lowercase. Alternatively, 'Group chats are a lot of fun' is also correct.

× I prefer to, uh, communicate face to face because it's a more easier to express our thoughts and, uh, is easy to understand the next person as well.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it's easier to express our thoughts and to understand the other person as well.

Use 'easier' not 'more easier' (double comparative). Remove extra 'is' before 'easy'. 'The next person' is incorrect; use 'the other person'. Maintain infinitive forms for parallel structure ('to express' and 'to understand').

× Uh, so there are a lot of conversations that are simply we can run in the face to face activity.

✓ There are many conversations that we can only have face to face.

Original sentence has awkward word order and unnecessary words. Use natural structure: 'conversations that we can only have face to face'. 'Run in the face to face activity' is unnatural.

× Yeah, sometimes I argue with my friends on wrong things I, which I do not like to do.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I argue with my friends about things I think are wrong and that I do not like to do.

Use 'argue about' not 'argue on'. The clause needs clear relative structure: 'things I think are wrong and that I do not like to do'. Maintain present simple for habitual actions.

× And I, uh, sometimes I also, uh, say to my friends, do not, uh, do this work, this work, this work.

✓ Sometimes I also tell my friends, 'Please don't do this' or 'Don't do that', repeating when necessary.

Use 'tell' rather than 'say to my friends'. 'Do not do this work' is awkward; 'don't do this' is more natural. Quotation punctuation shown for clarity in explanation; in correction use a natural phrasing. Avoid repeating words; use 'repeating when necessary'.