聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like chatting, then give one or two specific supporting details. Reduce hesitations and repetitions. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect ideas and avoid irrelevant comments about naps or video classes unless they directly support your answer.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends a lot. Because I study for long hours, chatting helps me relax and catch up quickly, mostly via text or quick voice calls. For example, during breaks I often message a close friend to unwind, which cheers me up.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and add specific examples or details to make the answer richer. Avoid fillers and unclear phrases; choose precise vocabulary (e.g., 'memes', 'recommendations'). Use one linking word to connect ideas.

示例: We usually talk about TV shows and movies. For example, we share funny memes and recommend new series to each other, and sometimes we discuss plot twists or favorite characters.

建议: Answer directly and use correct grammar and fewer hesitations. State preference clearly, give one reason and one brief example. Correct singular/plural (one friend) and use linking words like because to explain.

示例: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because I'm introverted and feel more comfortable sharing personal things. For instance, I often confide in my closest friend when I'm stressed.

建议: Make a clear choice and explain with distinct reasons. Avoid repeated words and filler sounds. Structure: state preference, then give one or two specific reasons and an example. Use correct grammar (social media singular/plural) and linking words (however, but, because).

示例: I prefer face-to-face conversations for personal matters because they feel more sincere, but I often use social media to share everyday updates or photos. For example, I would talk in person about family issues, but post holiday pictures online.

建议: Provide a concise direct answer: say whether you argue and then explain with a reason and an example. Reduce repetitions and fillers. Use coherent linking words (however, so) and correct tense. Mention how you resolve conflicts to show maturity.

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends over small things, but I usually apologize first because I value the relationship. For example, after a recent disagreement about plans, I called my friend to apologize and we resolved it quickly.

× I think it is one of my favorite things to do throughout the day.

✓ I think it is one of my favorite things to do throughout the day.

No correction needed; sentence correctly uses present simple to state a habitual preference.

× Like I'm quite busy in my assignment from morning to evening, so I used to take a a little nap at that moment.

✓ I'm usually quite busy with my assignments from morning to evening, so I take a short nap during the day.

The original mixes past habit 'used to' with present routine. Use present simple 'I take' for habitual actions. Also correct preposition 'busy with', plural 'assignments', remove duplicate 'a', and 'a short nap' is more natural.

× I used to talk with my friends like chatting and video calls or But out of that chatting is my favorite.

✓ I talk with my friends by chatting or video calling, but chatting is my favorite.

Again 'used to' wrongly implies past habit; use present simple for current routine. Replace awkward 'like' and 'or But out of that' with 'by' and 'but'. Use gerund 'video calling' to match 'chatting'.

× I don't like to talk in video class that much.

✓ I don't like talking in video calls that much.

Use gerund 'talking' after 'like' for preference. 'Video class' is unclear; 'video calls' matches context earlier.

× I usually chat with my friends about TV, movies, series.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about TV shows, movies, and series.

Add 'shows' after TV for clarity and include commas with 'and' for list coherence. No tense change needed.

× Like for example, we often say each other funny memes from our favorite souls and laugh each laugh together even we don't have anything to talk for a talk, uh, for conversation.

✓ For example, we often send each other funny memes from our favorite pages and laugh together even when we don't have anything to talk about.

'Send each other' is the correct verb for memes. 'Favorite souls' is incorrect—likely 'pages' or 'accounts'. 'Laugh each laugh together' is redundant; 'laugh together' suffices. Use 'when' and 'about' for 'talk about'. Remove fillers.

× I think being an introvert person, I really don't like to talk, uh, in a group of people.

✓ I think, being an introvert, I don't really like talking in groups of people.

Use 'being an introvert' or simply 'being an introvert' not 'introvert person'. Prefer 'don't really like talking' (gerund after 'like') and plural 'groups' or 'a group' consistently.

× I prefer to talk with one friends with whom I can say everything's from my sorrow to happiness.

✓ I prefer to talk with one friend with whom I can share everything, from my sorrows to my happiness.

Use singular 'friend' to match 'one'. 'Say everything's' is incorrect; 'share everything' is natural. Use plural 'sorrows' and possessive 'my happiness' for parallelism.

× I think that's what I prefer, Umm.

✓ I think that's what I prefer.

Remove filler 'Umm'. Sentence is otherwise fine in present tense.

× I think, uh, as, as I mentioned earlier, as being an introvert person, I really can open up to uh, any people in one to one conversation, like face to face.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, being an introvert, I can open up to people in one-to-one conversations, such as face-to-face meetings.

Simplify filler words. Use 'people' without 'any' for general statement. Hyphenate 'one-to-one' and pluralize 'conversations' for generality. 'Face-to-face' is hyphenated as adjective.

× But uh, if I have to say anything or tell anything about uh, my life regarding my life.

✓ But if I have to say or tell anything about my life,

Remove redundant phrase 'regarding my life'. The clause should be concise. 'If I have to say or tell anything about my life' is clear.

× And I prefer using a social medias to share rather than face to face.

✓ And I prefer using social media to share rather than talking face-to-face.

'Social media' is uncountable here, so remove 'a' and use singular form. Use 'talking face-to-face' to parallel 'using social media to share'.

× Like I would say I'm a kind of friend like that, argue the small things, but uh, I'm, I'm the first one to say sorry as compared to the other person because I don't want to lose that person.

✓ I would say I'm the kind of friend who argues about small things, but I'm usually the first to say sorry because I don't want to lose that person.

'A kind of friend like that' is awkward; 'the kind of friend who' is correct. Use 'argues about small things'. Remove repetition and 'as compared to the other person' which is wordy; 'usually the first to say sorry' is natural.

× I really believe, umm, I really want, I, I cannot let go of friendship.

✓ I really believe I cannot let go of a friendship.

Streamline fillers and repetition. Use 'a friendship' or 'friendships' depending on meaning; 'let go of a friendship' is natural. Present simple is appropriate.

× So I think, umm, if I'm arguing, then also I'll be the one saying sorry for my mistakes or.

✓ So I think if I'm arguing, I'll still be the one to apologize for my mistakes.

Replace 'then also' with 'still' and 'saying sorry' with 'apologize' or 'say sorry'. Remove trailing 'or'. Future 'I'll' is acceptable for intention; sentence is now concise.