聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences more concise and correct the grammar, for example, 'it makes my boredom go away' instead of 'it's makes my boredom goes away'. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'we can we can'.

示例: Yes, I love chatting with my friends because it helps me relieve boredom and allows us to plan fun activities together.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and repetitions. Be specific and organize your ideas logically. For example, mention the topics clearly and avoid confusing phrases like 'Are they good doing'.

示例: We usually chat about our favorite games like Minecraft, CS3, and Roblox. We enjoy sharing tips and experiences about these games.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has some redundancy and minor grammatical errors. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating phrases like 'I would I would'. Also, correct expressions like 'get me over stimulated' to 'overwhelm me'.

示例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it prevents confusion and avoids feeling overwhelmed by too many people talking. I enjoy spending time with my best friend, especially when we eat together.

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating similar phrases. For example, instead of 'what I'm gonna response', say 'what I am going to respond'.

示例: I prefer communicating via social media because it allows me to read messages and respond thoughtfully at my own pace.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid confusing phrases like 'we are you'. Be specific and concise. For example, explain why you argue and use correct grammar such as 'he often leaves my messages unread'.

示例: Yes, I often argue with my best friend because he frequently leaves my messages unread and doesn't reply.

× I do love chatting with my friends, yes definitely because it's makes my boredom goes away and I can just tell them to hang out with me so they can we can we can have fun together.

✓ I do love chatting with my friends, yes definitely because it makes my boredom go away and I can just tell them to hang out with me so we can have fun together.

The phrase 'it's makes' is incorrect because 'it' (third person singular) should be followed by 'makes' without 'is'. Also, 'my boredom goes away' should be 'my boredom go away' after 'makes' to maintain correct verb form. The repeated 'they can we can we can' is redundant and confusing; it should be simplified to 'so we can have fun together'.

× I do love chatting with my friends, yes definitely because it's makes my boredom goes away and I can just tell them to hang out with me so they can we can we can have fun together.

✓ I do love chatting with my friends, yes definitely because it makes my boredom go away and I can just tell them to hang out with me so we can have fun together.

The phrase 'tell them to hang out with me' is acceptable, but the redundant 'they can we can we can' is incorrect and should be removed for clarity and correctness.

× Umm, we usually usually chat about James or House. Are they good doing or specifically games? Yeah specifically it's Minecraft or CS3. Yeah, we love those games and Roblox also. Yeah, I forgot, sorry about that. So anyways, yeah, that's about it.

✓ Umm, we usually chat about James or House. Are they good at doing something, or specifically games? Yeah, specifically Minecraft or CS3. Yeah, we love those games and Roblox also. Yeah, I forgot, sorry about that. So anyways, yeah, that's about it.

The sentence 'Are they good doing or specifically games?' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It should be 'Are they good at doing something, or specifically games?' to clarify the meaning and correct the preposition usage.

× Are they good doing or specifically games?

✓ Are they good at doing something, or specifically games?

The verb 'good' is typically followed by the preposition 'at' when referring to skills or activities. Therefore, 'good doing' is incorrect; it should be 'good at doing'.

× So I would I would rather have my best friend to talk to me all the time or hang out with me when we're eating.

✓ So I would rather have my best friend talk to me all the time or hang out with me when we're eating.

The phrase 'have my best friend to talk' is incorrect; after 'have' in this context, the base form of the verb should be used without 'to'. Also, the repetition 'I would I would' is redundant and should be reduced to a single 'I would'.

× He doesn't answer to me.

✓ He doesn't answer me.

The verb 'answer' does not require the preposition 'to' when followed by an object pronoun. Therefore, 'answer to me' is incorrect; it should be 'answer me'.