聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use correct grammar and avoid filler words like 'umm'. Also, keep your sentences clear and concise. For example, say 'I enjoy chatting with my close friend Trey; we talk all day.'

示例: I enjoy chatting with my close friend Trey; we talk all day about various topics.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with specific topics you discuss, using correct grammar and linking words.

示例: We usually chat about our daily lives, school, and our favourite hobbies because we share similar interests.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains errors. Clearly state your preference and reasons, using correct vocabulary and grammar.

示例: I prefer chatting with one friend at a time because it allows for more meaningful conversations and I don't have much free time.

建议: Good idea expressed, but improve grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: To be honest, I prefer communicating face-to-face rather than via social media because face-to-face conversations feel more lively and personal, whereas online chats tend to be brief.

建议: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Clearly express your opinion with supporting details and correct grammar.

示例: I have friends who share similar views with me, so we rarely argue. Instead, we focus on positive and enjoyable conversations.

× Her name is Trey and we chatting UMM all of day.

✓ Her name is Trey and we are chatting all day.

The verb 'chatting' requires an auxiliary verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense. The phrase 'all of day' is incorrect; it should be 'all day'. The correct sentence uses 'are chatting' to indicate an ongoing action.

× We process the child every day.

✓ We discuss the child every day.

The verb 'process' is incorrectly used here; the intended meaning is likely 'discuss'. Also, 'process' is not typically used with 'the child' in this context. Using 'discuss' fits the context of chatting about a topic.

× For this reason we endeavor to talking about everything resemble my our instructor.

✓ For this reason, we endeavour to talk about everything like our instructor.

The verb after 'endeavour to' should be in the base form 'talk', not the '-ing' form 'talking'. 'Resemble' is incorrectly used; 'like' is appropriate to express similarity. Also, 'my our instructor' is incorrect; it should be 'our instructor'.

× Actually I neglected Chad was a group.

✓ Actually, I thought Chad was a group.

The verb 'neglected' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'thought' to express a mistaken belief. The sentence structure is improved by adding a comma after 'Actually'.

× I just demanded to chat with my friends because I don't have money time to chat.

✓ I just want to chat with my friends because I don't have much time to chat.

'Demanded to chat' is incorrect; 'want to chat' is appropriate to express desire. 'Money time' is incorrect; it should be 'much time' to indicate quantity of time.

× To be honest, I prefer communicate face to face rather than social media because when I talk in the social media I want to soon finalize it.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media because when I talk on social media I want to finish quickly.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus base verb: 'prefer to communicate'. The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'social media'; 'on' or 'via' is correct. 'Want to soon finalize it' is awkward; 'want to finish quickly' is clearer.

× But when I communicate face to face, it's more like live, lively and personally.

✓ But when I communicate face to face, it's more live, lively and personal.

The word 'personally' is an adverb but should be the adjective 'personal' to describe 'it'. 'Live' and 'lively' are adjectives here and correctly used.

× Actually I have some friends that more resemble to me for this reason.

✓ Actually, I have some friends who are more like me for this reason.

The relative pronoun 'that' should be 'who' when referring to people. 'More resemble to me' is incorrect; 'are more like me' is the correct expression.