聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammatical accuracy by using correct verb forms and articles. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to sound more natural. For example, say 'I chat with friends every day because it is fun and helps me reduce stress after a hard day of studying at school.'

示例: Yes, I chat with friends every day because it is fun and helps me reduce stress after a hard day of studying at school.

建议: Use correct verb forms and prepositions. Clarify and specify what you mean by 'realize and entertainment'. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'I usually chat with my friends in the evening after I complete my homework. We spend time relaxing and entertaining ourselves by sharing stories.'

示例: I usually chat with my friends in the evening after I complete my homework. We spend time relaxing and entertaining ourselves by sharing stories.

建议: Avoid filler words and use singular/plural forms correctly. Provide clearer and more specific reasons. For example, 'I prefer chatting with one friend because I can share personal stories, such as about my mother who works at a school, and we often share funny stories to relax and have fun together.'

示例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I can share personal stories, such as about my mother who works at a school, and we often share funny stories to relax and have fun together.

建议: Use correct prepositions and grammar. Avoid filler words. Clarify your ideas and use linking words. For example, 'I prefer communicating via social media because it is very convenient and fast. I can share my personal stories more quickly than when communicating face-to-face.'

示例: I prefer communicating via social media because it is very convenient and fast. I can share my personal stories more quickly than when communicating face-to-face.

建议: Avoid filler words and improve clarity. Use correct expressions to describe disagreement and resolution. For example, 'Yes, sometimes we have different opinions, but we discuss them calmly and try to reach an agreement.'

示例: Yes, sometimes we have different opinions, but we discuss them calmly and try to reach an agreement.

× Uh, yes, I chatting with friends every day because it's fun and help me reduce stress after, uh, the uh, hard working umm, time study at school.

✓ Uh, yes, I chat with friends every day because it's fun and helps me reduce stress after, uh, the uh, hard working umm, time studying at school.

The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is the base verb 'chat' after the subject 'I' in the present simple tense. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Additionally, 'time study' should be 'time studying' to correctly use the gerund form after 'time.'

× I usually chatting with friend in the evening when I complete my homework at the day and spend time to realize and entertainment.

✓ I usually chat with friends in the evening when I complete my homework during the day and spend time relaxing and entertaining myself.

The verb 'chatting' should be 'chat' to match the present simple tense with 'I usually.' 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context. 'At the day' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'during the day.' 'Spend time to realize and entertainment' is incorrect; it should be 'spend time relaxing and entertaining myself' to use correct verb forms and meaning.

× Uh, actually I prefer chatting with uh one friends because I can share my uh stories like uh, mother is a school and sometime uh, share funny story to relax and have fun together.

✓ Uh, actually I prefer chatting with one friend because I can share my stories like, uh, my mother is a teacher and sometimes, uh, share funny stories to relax and have fun together.

'One friends' is incorrect; 'friend' should be singular to agree with 'one.' 'Stories' is plural, which is correct, but 'story' later should be plural 'stories.' 'Mother is a school' is incorrect; it should be 'my mother is a teacher' for clarity and correctness. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' as an adverb.

× I think I prefer communicate in a social media because it's very convenient and, uh, fast. I can, uh, share my personal story more, uh, faster than, uh, uh, missed face to face.

✓ I think I prefer communicating on social media because it's very convenient and, uh, fast. I can, uh, share my personal stories more, uh, quickly than, uh, missing face-to-face interaction.

'Prefer communicate' should be 'prefer communicating' to use the gerund after 'prefer.' 'In a social media' is incorrect; it should be 'on social media.' 'Personal story' should be plural 'personal stories' to match context. 'More faster' is redundant; 'more' should be removed or replaced with 'much faster.' 'Missed face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'missing face-to-face interaction.'

× Uh, yes, When we have another idea, we can agree together to, uh, admit.

✓ Uh, yes, when we have different ideas, we can agree together to, uh, admit them.

'Another idea' should be 'different ideas' to express disagreement. 'Agree together to admit' is unclear; it should be 'agree together to admit them' to clarify the object. Also, 'When' should not be capitalized mid-sentence.