聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammatical accuracy and natural phrasing. For example, use 'I really like chatting with my friends because I am an outgoing person and dislike being alone. I am quite extroverted, so chatting with friends makes me happy.'

示例: I really enjoy chatting with my friends because I am an outgoing person and dislike being alone. Being extroverted, I find that talking with friends always lifts my mood.

建议: Organize your answer with clearer structure and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, improve sentence clarity and grammar. For example, 'We usually chat about food first, no matter what happened during the day. Then, we might talk about the weather, our outfits, or even online shopping.'

示例: We usually start by talking about food, regardless of what happened during the day. After that, we often discuss the weather, our outfits, or sometimes online shopping experiences.

建议: Clarify your ideas and use appropriate vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases like 'make a huge mirror' and 'different opponents.' For example, 'I prefer chatting with a group because it allows us to share different opinions on the same topic, which I find very interesting.'

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows us to share different opinions on the same topic, making the conversation more engaging and interesting.

建议: Improve sentence fluency and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, 'I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see people's expressions, which are key to understanding their feelings better.'

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see people's expressions, which helps me understand their feelings and thoughts more clearly.

建议: Work on grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, 'Of course, arguments are inevitable because we have different opinions and experiences as individuals.'

示例: Of course, arguments are inevitable because we have different opinions and experiences as individuals, which sometimes leads to disagreements.

× Yes, I'm really like to chatting with my friends 'cause I'm a really outgoing person and I can't stand the solitary.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with my friends 'cause I'm a really outgoing person and I can't stand being solitary.

The phrase 'like to chatting' is incorrect because 'like' should be followed by either the base form with 'to' (like to chat) or the gerund form without 'to' (like chatting). Also, 'the solitary' is incorrect; it should be 'being solitary' to express the state of being alone.

× Yes, I'm a really extrovert so chatting with my friends made me happy.

✓ Yes, I'm really an extrovert, so chatting with my friends makes me happy.

The word 'extrovert' is a noun and should be preceded by an article 'an'. Also, 'made me happy' is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'makes me happy' is appropriate.

× Definitely foods, no matter what happened today, we always the first topic always become to food and we will talk about what we eat and secondly maybe we can talk about the weather like our outfits, like buying some gizmo online.

✓ Definitely food. No matter what happened today, the first topic always becomes food, and we talk about what we eat. Secondly, maybe we talk about the weather, our outfits, or buying some gizmos online.

'Foods' should be singular 'food' when referring to food in general. The sentence structure is also corrected for clarity and grammar. 'Become to food' is incorrect; it should be 'becomes food'. 'Gizmo' should be plural 'gizmos' when referring to multiple items.

× I prefer chat with a group of people 'cause I think a group of people can make a huge mirror and we always have a different opponents on on the same things.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because I think a group can create a huge mirror, and we always have different opinions on the same things.

After 'prefer', the gerund form 'chatting' is required. 'Make a huge mirror' is unclear; assuming the intended meaning is 'create a huge mirror' or 'reflect ideas'. 'Opponents' is incorrect; the correct word is 'opinions'. Also, 'on on' is a repetition error.

× I prefer face to face communication because I think when we talk a topic in person like I can, I can see their expression.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because I think when we talk about a topic in person, I can see their expressions.

The phrase 'talk a topic' is incorrect; it should be 'talk about a topic'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'Expression' should be plural 'expressions' to match the context.

× Of course, I think argument is the common sense is something inevitable.

✓ Of course, I think argument is common sense and something inevitable.

The sentence is awkward and contains redundancy. 'The common sense is something inevitable' is incorrect; 'common sense' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Umm, sometimes we will have a different views on the same because we're different person and we have different thinking.

✓ Umm, sometimes we have different views on the same thing because we're different people and we have different ways of thinking.

'A different views' is incorrect; 'views' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'Different person' should be plural 'different people'. 'Different thinking' is vague; 'different ways of thinking' is clearer.

× So the experience as also is a different.

✓ So our experiences are also different.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Corrected to proper subject-verb agreement and clearer meaning.

× So maybe, uh, we always will argue some sometime.

✓ So maybe, uh, we will always argue sometimes.

The placement of 'always' should be before the main verb 'argue'. 'Some sometime' is incorrect; 'sometimes' is the correct adverb to indicate occasional occurrence.