聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammatical accuracy and word choice. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Also, clarify the time expression and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, chatting with my friends is one of my favorite activities. I talk to them whenever I have free time because I have my own phone. Moreover, when I feel stressed, chatting helps me to relieve my stress.

建议: Reduce filler words and improve sentence structure. Provide more specific details and use linking words to organize your answer clearly.

示例: I usually chat about my studies because we attend different schools. For example, we talk about the new environment, the friends we have made, our classes, and our teachers.

建议: Work on grammar and clarity. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and avoid repetition.

示例: I prefer chatting with only one friend rather than a group because it is easier to talk about my personal stress and share my stories more openly.

建议: Avoid filler words and improve fluency. Use clearer expressions and provide reasons with linking words.

示例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because social media interactions often feel less genuine. Also, sometimes people on social media may not be true friends.

建议: Improve grammar and sentence structure. Use past tense consistently and avoid filler words. Provide a clear and concise explanation with linking words.

示例: Yes, when I was 14, I had a big argument with a friend because she cheated on her exams. This made me very angry since she got a higher score than me unfairly.

× Yes it's one of my favorite activities, I chatting with my friends every time I wear because I have my my own phone and when I becoming stressed I will chatting with them to reduce relieve my stress.

✓ Yes, it's one of my favorite activities. I chat with my friends every time I wear because I have my own phone, and when I become stressed, I will chat with them to relieve my stress.

The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used instead of the base form 'chat' after the subject 'I'. Also, 'becoming' should be 'become' to match the present tense. The verb 'will chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'will chat' as modal verbs are followed by the base form of the verb. Additionally, 'reduce relieve' is redundant; 'relieve' alone is sufficient.

× I usually chat about my study since uh, we study in different school, umm and umm.

✓ I usually chat about my studies since we study in different schools.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'different school'; it should be 'different schools' to indicate plural. Also, 'study' should be plural 'studies' to refer to academic subjects generally.

× We often umm chat about umm, the new environments and the new friends we meet and about the dress in uh studies and about the teacher.

✓ We often chat about the new environments, the new friends we meet, the dress code in studies, and the teachers.

'Dress' should be 'dress code' or 'clothes' to make sense, and 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match the plural context. Also, listing items requires consistent plural forms.

× I prefer chatting with only one friend to a group of people because I think when I chat with on friends I can easy to talk with them about my my own stress and become easily to share about my stories.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend to a group of people because I think when I chat with one friend, I can easily talk with them about my own stress and easily share my stories.

'On friends' is a typo and should be 'one friend'. 'Easy to talk' should be 'easily talk' to use the adverb form. 'Become easily to share' is incorrect; it should be 'easily share'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because uh, when we communi communicate through social M medias, umm, I think it's not uh, real and uh, it's maybe we maybe uh, have some uh, fake friend.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when we communicate through social media, I think it's not real and maybe we have some fake friends.

'Social M medias' is incorrect; it should be 'social media' (uncountable noun). 'Fake friend' should be plural 'fake friends' to match the context.

× Yes, when I was 14, I have a big agreement, uh, with my friends because, uh, she is, she uh, cheated in her exams and it's make me very angry because when umm, they uh, they get scored, she's uh, more higher score than me.

✓ Yes, when I was 14, I had a big argument with my friend because she cheated in her exams and it made me very angry because when they got their scores, she had a higher score than me.

'Have' should be past tense 'had' to match 'when I was 14'. 'Agreement' is incorrect; it should be 'argument'. 'Is' should be 'was' to maintain past tense. 'It's make' should be 'it made'. 'They get scored' should be 'they got their scores'. 'More higher' is redundant; 'higher' alone is correct.