聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and awkward phrases like "maintain their our relationship boosting cement reports." Try to give a clear, natural response directly addressing the question, avoiding redundancy and confusing expressions.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us stay connected and share our daily experiences.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and specific supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Since I am in my final year of high school, my friends and I usually talk about our studies and daily routines. For example, we discuss homework, exams, and the activities we do each day.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains many hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to give a direct answer with clear reasons and examples, using linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: It depends on the situation. If I have something important to discuss, I prefer chatting with a group. However, when I want a more personal conversation, I prefer talking to one close friend.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and errors. Try to clearly state your preference and explain your reasons with specific details and linking words.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to understand each other better. For instance, seeing facial expressions helps avoid misunderstandings that can happen in social media chats.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your thoughts clearly with correct grammar and provide specific examples to support your points.

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends. However, after arguments, we usually talk things through, which helps us understand each other better and strengthens our friendship.

× it is also the way to help them maintain their our relationship boosting cement reports

✓ it is also a way to help them maintain our relationship and strengthen it

The original sentence misuses pronouns 'their our' which is confusing and incorrect. 'Our' is the correct possessive pronoun here referring to the relationship shared. Also, 'boosting cement reports' is unclear and likely a mistranslation or error; 'strengthen it' is a clearer expression for maintaining relationships.

× as you may know, and the final year of high school, so the mainly conversation of them, uh, is umm, study and daily basic

✓ As you may know, it is the final year of high school, so their main conversations are about study and daily basics

The original sentence has poor sentence structure and unclear phrasing. 'Mainly conversation of them' is incorrect; it should be 'their main conversations'. Also, 'daily basic' should be pluralized to 'daily basics' to refer to routine topics.

× we also have a shared daily out daily basics and what activity we do a day

✓ We also share daily routines and talk about the activities we do each day

The phrase 'shared daily out daily basics' is unclear and incorrect. 'Shared' should be 'share' to match the subject 'we'. 'Daily basics' is better expressed as 'daily routines'. 'What activity we do a day' is awkward; 'the activities we do each day' is clearer.

× it's depend on situation

✓ it depends on the situation

The verb 'depend' must agree with the third person singular subject 'it', so it should be 'depends'. Also, 'on situation' requires the definite article 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× I will I want I am into chat with a group uh

✓ I will want to chat with a group

The original sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. 'I will I want I am into chat' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I will want to chat' or simply 'I want to chat'. Also, 'chat' should be followed by 'with' and the object.

× I have umm, sadly busy good on friend in order to easily connect

✓ I have, sadly, a busy good friend to easily connect with

The phrase 'busy good on friend' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'a busy good friend'. Also, 'in order to easily connect' needs a preposition 'with' after 'connect' to be correct.

× I prefer Co communicating 5 to 5 foreign that uh, we also, uh, have a conversation without hesitation and confused sometimes if we don't see each fight

✓ I prefer communicating face-to-face because we can have conversations without hesitation and confusion sometimes if we don't see each other

'Co communicating 5 to 5 foreign' is a mishearing or typo for 'communicating face-to-face'. 'Confused sometimes' should be 'confusion sometimes'. 'If we don't see each fight' should be 'if we don't see each other'. The prepositions and phrases need correction for clarity.

× we can't uh mislead and misunderstanding the meaning of

✓ we can't mislead or misunderstand the meaning

The verbs 'mislead' and 'misunderstand' should be parallel and connected properly. 'Misunderstanding' is a noun form; here the verb 'misunderstand' is needed. Also, 'can't' should be followed by the base form of verbs.

× I often argue with friends, uh, however, umm after arguing with friends it is the time to have them maintain our relationship and can understanding well others

✓ I often argue with friends; however, after arguing, it is time to maintain our relationship and understand each other well

The phrase 'have them maintain' is incorrect; the subject should maintain the relationship. 'Can understanding' is incorrect; it should be 'understand'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct tense usage.

× we often have more conservation as they connected

✓ we often have more conversations as we become more connected

'Conservation' is a misspelling of 'conversation'. 'They connected' is incorrect pronoun usage; it should be 'we become connected' to match the subject. The sentence needs correction for plural noun and pronoun agreement.