聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and avoid redundancy. Instead of saying "I do like talking to my friends specially about things that we can relate to," you can say "Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially about topics we both relate to." Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially about topics we both relate to.

建议: Your answer is a bit repetitive and lengthy. Use linking words to make it coherent and avoid repeating similar phrases. For example, you can say, "We usually chat about various topics, such as recent events in our daily lives, the current situation, and the challenges we are facing."

示例: We usually chat about various topics, such as recent events in our daily lives, the current situation, and the challenges we are facing.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer linking words and more natural phrasing. For example, instead of "And there are also topics that I can casually convey with a group of friends," say "On the other hand, some topics are better suited for casual chats with a group." Also, avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like "And."

示例: It depends on the day. For personal topics, I prefer talking to a close friend. On the other hand, some topics are better suited for casual chats with a group. For instance, at a party, I enjoy talking with several friends.

建议: Your answer is clear but can be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating "more convenient" twice. Also, use linking words like "however" properly. For example, "I prefer face-to-face conversations with nearby friends because nothing beats emotional connection. However, for friends working abroad, I use social media since it's more convenient for both of us."

示例: I prefer face-to-face conversations with nearby friends because nothing beats emotional connection. However, for friends working abroad, I use social media since it's more convenient for both of us.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by adding a linking word and a bit more detail. For example, "Yes, I do argue with friends sometimes because it's normal to have different opinions. However, I believe it's important to respect each other's views."

示例: Yes, I do argue with friends sometimes because it's normal to have different opinions. However, I believe it's important to respect each other's views.

× Yes, I do like talking to my friends specially about things that we can relate to.

✓ Yes, I do like talking to my friends especially about things that we can relate to.

The word 'specially' is used to mean 'for a special purpose', but the correct adverb here is 'especially', which means 'particularly' or 'mainly'. Using 'especially' fits the intended meaning better.

× That would depend on the day, because there are certain topics that I would really want to talk about to a certain friend, especially those personal ones.

✓ That would depend on the day, because there are certain topics that I would really want to talk about with a certain friend, especially those personal ones.

The correct preposition to use with 'talk' in this context is 'with' rather than 'to'. We say 'talk with someone' when referring to a conversation between people.

× However, with friends who are already working abroad, I like talking to them so in social media because it is more convenient for them.

✓ However, with friends who are already working abroad, I like talking to them on social media because it is more convenient for them.

The correct preposition to use with 'social media' is 'on', not 'in'. We say 'on social media' to refer to platforms like Facebook, Twitter, etc.