聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and concise response directly addressing the question, and avoid redundancy. Use correct sentence structures and vocabulary to express your ideas naturally.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, colleagues, and family because it helps me express my feelings comfortably and stay connected with them.

建议: Your answer is too long and repetitive. Try to organize your ideas clearly with linking words and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Provide specific examples and keep your sentences concise and coherent.

示例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily routines, assignments, and plans to hang out. We also share our feelings and thoughts to stay connected.

建议: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid fragmented sentences.

示例: I prefer both chatting with a group or one friend depending on the situation. For example, I discuss big plans with groups, but for personal matters, I prefer one-on-one conversations.

建议: Your answer has many grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your feelings clearly and use correct grammar. Avoid incomplete sentences and explain your preference with reasons.

示例: I prefer communicating via social media because I am introverted and feel nervous talking face-to-face with new people. Social media makes it easier for me to express myself.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to answer directly whether you argue with friends or not, and explain why. Use complete sentences and organize your ideas logically.

示例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, I respect their perspectives and try to resolve conflicts peacefully.

× Yes, I do a lot to chatting with my friends, even my colleague and also my relatives and family because it's more easy to express ourselves in not sad for those who comfortable without talking them or.

✓ Yes, I do a lot of chatting with my friends, even my colleagues and also my relatives and family because it's easier to express ourselves and not feel sad for those who are comfortable without talking to them.

The phrase 'to chatting' is incorrect; after 'do a lot of' the gerund form 'chatting' should be used without 'to'. Also, 'colleague' should be plural 'colleagues' to match the plural context. 'More easy' should be 'easier' as the comparative form of 'easy'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I do a lot to chatting with my friends, even my colleague and also my relatives and family because it's more easy to express ourselves in not sad for those who comfortable without talking them or.

✓ Yes, I do a lot of chatting with my friends, even my colleagues and also my relatives and family because it's easier to express ourselves and not feel sad for those who are comfortable without talking to them.

The word 'colleague' should be plural 'colleagues' to agree with 'friends' and 'relatives' which are plural. Also, 'talking them' should be 'talking to them' to use the correct preposition.

× Yes, I do a lot to chatting with my friends, even my colleague and also my relatives and family because it's more easy to express ourselves in not sad for those who comfortable without talking them or.

✓ Yes, I do a lot of chatting with my friends, even my colleagues and also my relatives and family because it's easier to express ourselves and not feel sad for those who are comfortable without talking to them.

The phrase 'talking them' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'talking to them'. Also, 'in not sad' is incorrect; it should be 'not feel sad' to express the intended meaning.

× I usually chat about uh, like our daily routine, our assignment, our homework and our day-to-day life. Even we are express our feelings and also like uh, hang out or talking, making plans, everything we are talk and we are share our thoughts and everything we are share also reals.

✓ I usually chat about, uh, our daily routine, our assignments, our homework, and our day-to-day life. We also express our feelings and talk about hanging out or making plans. We talk and share our thoughts and also share real experiences.

The phrase 'we are express' is incorrect; it should be 'we express' in simple present tense. 'We are talk' and 'we are share' should be 'we talk' and 'we share' respectively. 'Assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match the context. 'Talking' should be 'talk about hanging out' for clarity. 'Reals' is unclear; 'real experiences' is more appropriate.

× I usually chat about uh, like our daily routine, our assignment, our homework and our day-to-day life. Even we are express our feelings and also like uh, hang out or talking, making plans, everything we are talk and we are share our thoughts and everything we are share also reals.

✓ I usually chat about, uh, our daily routine, our assignments, our homework, and our day-to-day life. We also express our feelings and talk about hanging out or making plans. We talk and share our thoughts and also share real experiences.

'Assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to agree with the plural list of topics. Consistency in plural forms improves clarity.

× I usually chat about uh, like our daily routine, our assignment, our homework and our day-to-day life. Even we are express our feelings and also like uh, hang out or talking, making plans, everything we are talk and we are share our thoughts and everything we are share also reals.

✓ I usually chat about, uh, our daily routine, our assignments, our homework, and our day-to-day life. We also express our feelings and talk about hanging out or making plans. We talk and share our thoughts and also share real experiences.

The phrase 'like uh, hang out or talking' is awkward; 'talk about hanging out or making plans' is clearer and grammatically correct. Using the gerund form after 'talk about' is appropriate.

× I prefer both because it's depending what kind of talk and what kind of things we are sharing. If we are make big plan and if they need a group then we are talking about with you know groups that we are. If we are meeting and planning something in a group, then we are group and if not then.

✓ I prefer both because it depends on what kind of talk and what kind of things we are sharing. If we are making a big plan and they need a group, then we talk about it with the group. If we are meeting and planning something in a group, then we are in a group; if not, then not.

'It's depending' should be 'it depends' (present tense). 'We are make' should be 'we are making' (present continuous). 'Talking about with you know groups that we are' is unclear; corrected to 'talk about it with the group'. Added missing prepositions and articles for clarity.

× I prefer both because it's depending what kind of talk and what kind of things we are sharing. If we are make big plan and if they need a group then we are talking about with you know groups that we are. If we are meeting and planning something in a group, then we are group and if not then.

✓ I prefer both because it depends on what kind of talk and what kind of things we are sharing. If we are making a big plan and they need a group, then we talk about it with the group. If we are meeting and planning something in a group, then we are in a group; if not, then not.

'It's depending' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it depends' in simple present tense. 'We are make' should be 'we are making' to use the present continuous tense correctly.

× I prefer both because it's depending what kind of talk and what kind of things we are sharing. If we are make big plan and if they need a group then we are talking about with you know groups that we are. If we are meeting and planning something in a group, then we are group and if not then.

✓ I prefer both because it depends on what kind of talk and what kind of things we are sharing. If we are making a big plan and they need a group, then we talk about it with the group. If we are meeting and planning something in a group, then we are in a group; if not, then not.

The phrase 'depending what kind of talk' requires the preposition 'on' after 'depends'. 'Talking about with you know groups' is incorrect; it should be 'talk about it with the group'. 'We are group' should be 'we are in a group' to use the correct preposition.

× I brought for spies social media because I afraid to talk to face to face and I'm introverted also so I just scared to face someone new. I feel nervous that's why I prefer to talk in a social media, it's better and it's easy to.

✓ I prefer social media because I am afraid to talk face to face and I'm introverted, so I am just scared to face someone new. I feel nervous; that's why I prefer to talk on social media. It's better and easier.

'I brought for spies social media' is unclear; corrected to 'I prefer social media'. 'I afraid' should be 'I am afraid' to use the modal verb 'am' correctly. 'Scared to face' should be 'scared to face' or better 'scared of facing'. 'Talk in a social media' should be 'talk on social media'. 'It's easy to' is incomplete; corrected to 'it's easier'.

× I brought for spies social media because I afraid to talk to face to face and I'm introverted also so I just scared to face someone new. I feel nervous that's why I prefer to talk in a social media, it's better and it's easy to.

✓ I prefer social media because I am afraid to talk face to face and I'm introverted, so I am just scared to face someone new. I feel nervous; that's why I prefer to talk on social media. It's better and easier.

The phrase 'talk to face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'talk face to face'. 'Talk in a social media' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'talk on social media'.

× Is we do we are your friends lots of time. We we have we all we people have a different thoughts that that's why our individual thoughts it's a are different. So every person has their own perspective. So where are you and the things that.

✓ Yes, we do argue with our friends a lot of times. We all have different thoughts; that's why our individual thoughts are different. So every person has their own perspective.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Is we do we are your friends lots of time' is corrected to 'Yes, we do argue with our friends a lot of times' to express the intended meaning in correct past tense and structure. 'We all have different thoughts' is corrected for subject-verb agreement and clarity. The last fragment is omitted as it is incomplete.