聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa bị mơ hồ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn để người nghe dễ hiểu.

示例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relieve stress and share my problems with them, which makes me feel better.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện.

示例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, problems we face, fun experiences, and sometimes we share personal secrets.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích trò chuyện nhóm.

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to share different opinions and get various answers to my questions.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

示例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it helps me understand their emotions better and makes me feel more confident during conversations.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ hơn về chủ đề tranh luận.

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends about topics like English or things we have learned, but it's usually friendly and helps us understand each other better.

× Yes, I'm interested in chatting with my friends because it made me really stress or I can't share anything with my best friend and they can they can solve my problem.

✓ Yes, I'm interested in chatting with my friends because it makes me less stressed, and I can share things with my best friend who can solve my problems.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'made' when referring to a general or habitual action. It should be in the present tense 'makes' to indicate ongoing effect. Also, 'really stress' is incorrect; it should be 'less stressed' or 'relieved from stress'. The phrase 'they can they can solve my problem' is repetitive and unclear; it should be singular 'who can solve my problems' to refer to the best friend.

× I would say that I have a lot of story to chat with my friends.

✓ I would say that I have a lot of stories to chat about with my friends.

The noun 'story' should be plural 'stories' because 'a lot of' refers to multiple items. Also, the verb 'chat' is usually followed by 'about' when referring to topics.

× I I chatting with my friend every day.

✓ I chat with my friend every day.

The phrase 'I chatting' is incorrect because 'chatting' is a present participle and needs an auxiliary verb to form the present continuous tense. Since the sentence describes a habitual action, the simple present 'I chat' is appropriate.

× We are call every time when we have problems, when we have a fun story, when we have story in about life and can share secrets.

✓ We call each other every time we have problems, a fun story, or stories about life and can share secrets.

'We are call' is incorrect; it should be 'We call each other' to indicate mutual action. Also, 'a fun story' and 'stories about life' need to be parallel and correctly pluralized. The phrase 'story in about life' is incorrect and should be 'stories about life'.

× Uh, I prefer to chat a group of people because they have a lot of members so we can share, share some taste of food or fictional.

✓ Uh, I prefer to chat with a group of people because they have a lot of members, so we can share tastes of food or fiction.

The phrase 'chat a group' is missing the preposition 'with'. 'Taste' should be plural 'tastes' to match 'some'. 'Fictional' is an adjective and should be replaced with the noun 'fiction'.

× I prefer to chat a group of people because they have a lot of members so we can share, share some taste of food or fictional.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because they have a lot of members, so we can share tastes of food or fiction.

The verb 'chat' requires the preposition 'with' when indicating the people involved. Missing 'with' causes the sentence to be grammatically incorrect.

× I, I can ask a lot of people and they can answer me. Umm, it's.

✓ I can ask a lot of people, and they can answer me. Umm, it's helpful.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'Umm, it's.' which is incomplete. Adding 'helpful' completes the thought. Also, the repeated 'I,' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× I would say that I prefer to communicate face to face because I want to see them and when I talk with them offline I feel very confident and I can see the them emotional emotion.

✓ I would say that I prefer to communicate face to face because I want to see them, and when I talk with them offline, I feel very confident and can see their emotions.

The phrase 'see the them emotional emotion' is incorrect. It should be 'see their emotions' to correctly use the possessive pronoun and plural noun. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× Of course, every day I argue, argue with my friends.

✓ Of course, I argue with my friends every day.

The repetition of 'argue' is unnecessary. The adverbial phrase 'every day' is better placed at the end for natural English word order.

× We argue a lot of story, like story about English, story about what we learn, what we have learned today.

✓ We argue about a lot of stories, like stories about English, what we learn, and what we have learned today.

'Story' should be plural 'stories' because 'a lot of' indicates multiple items. Also, 'argue a lot of story' is incorrect; it should be 'argue about a lot of stories' to use the correct preposition and plural form.

× Umm, we we can say my our secrets.

✓ Umm, we can share our secrets.

The phrase 'my our secrets' is contradictory and incorrect. It should be 'our secrets' to indicate shared secrets. Also, 'can say' is better replaced with 'can share' for clarity.