聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid redundancy by choosing precise words and structuring your sentence more naturally. Also, limit your response to about 3-4 sentences for better effectiveness.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel safe and happy. Sharing my thoughts with them brings me peace and strengthens our bond.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and is incomplete. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and provide specific details. Avoid hesitation or filler words and keep your answer coherent.

示例: I usually talk about my relationship with my boyfriend and share personal experiences. We also discuss our daily lives and interests.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to improve coherence. Also, try to be more concise and clear.

示例: I prefer chatting with just one person rather than a group because I get nervous speaking in front of several people. Even a small group makes me anxious, so one-on-one conversations are more comfortable for me.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains hesitation and incorrect word choices. Try to organise your ideas clearly, avoid fillers, and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, use linking words to compare the two methods effectively.

示例: I prefer both face-to-face communication and social media. While social media is convenient for staying connected, face-to-face conversations allow for better expression and understanding.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using more varied vocabulary. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: I have never argued with my close friends or family because I dislike conflicts. Even small disagreements make me feel sad, so I prefer to maintain harmony in my relationships.

× Yes, I do like chatting with my friends because that makes me feel so safe and happy and peaceful to share something with my friends and love.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friends because it makes me feel so safe, happy, and peaceful to share something with my friends and loved ones.

The phrase 'that makes me feel' is better replaced with 'it makes me feel' to refer correctly to the activity of chatting. Also, 'love' should be 'loved ones' to correctly express people you care about. The use of 'chatting' is correct as a gerund after 'like.'

× I usually chat with my friends about my relations side with my boyfriend and I just like something to share. Oh ****.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about my relationship with my boyfriend, and I just like having something to share.

The phrase 'relations side with my boyfriend' is incorrect; it should be 'relationship with my boyfriend.' Also, 'like something to share' is unclear; 'like having something to share' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I prefer chat with just only one person to group in the group because I would be get so nervous when I speak in the public, even just three people in front of the three people, so I prefer just one of each.

✓ I prefer chatting with just one person rather than a group because I get very nervous when I speak in public, even if it's just three people, so I prefer just one person each time.

After 'prefer,' the gerund form 'chatting' is required. 'Just only one person' is redundant; 'just one person' suffices. 'I would be get' is incorrect; it should be 'I get.' 'In the public' should be 'in public.' The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I think I prefer both because I umm, conversation, connection, communicate with uh, by social media. Social media it's much useful and inconvenience, but face to face is much more expressions.

✓ I think I prefer both because I can have conversations and communicate through social media. Social media is very useful and convenient, but face-to-face communication shows much more expression.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing. 'Communicate with uh, by social media' is corrected to 'communicate through social media.' 'Much useful and inconvenience' should be 'very useful and convenient.' 'Face to face is much more expressions' is corrected to 'face-to-face communication shows much more expression.'

× I've never argued with my friends in my life because I hate arguing with my close close friends, even my mom. I feel so sad when I argue even it's so small things so I don't like that.

✓ I've never argued with my friends in my life because I hate arguing with my close friends, even my mom. I feel so sad when I argue, even over small things, so I don't like that.

The phrase 'close close friends' is redundant; one 'close' is enough. 'Even it's so small things' is incorrect; it should be 'even over small things.' The rest of the sentence is correct in tense and structure.