聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: In English (Cambodia), you should try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, say 'I love chatting with my friends and family about various topics, whether funny or serious.' Also, keep your answer concise and within 5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I love chatting with my friends and family about different topics, whether they are funny or serious. It helps me feel connected and enjoy our time together.

建议: In English (Cambodia), focus on clear sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'I usually chat with my friends about our studies and experiences because sharing these helps us become closer and more comfortable with each other.' Avoid repetition and improve grammar.

示例: I usually chat with my friends about our studies and personal experiences because sharing these things helps us build a closer and more comfortable friendship.

建议: In English (Cambodia), try to use correct vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. For example, say 'I prefer chatting in a group because I enjoy talking with many people. However, for personal matters, I prefer to talk with one close friend.' This makes your answer more natural and easier to understand.

示例: I prefer chatting in a group because I enjoy talking with many people. However, if I want to discuss personal problems, I prefer talking with one close friend.

建议: In English (Cambodia), improve grammar and sentence flow by saying, 'It depends. I prefer face-to-face communication when working with others because it is more effective. However, social media like Facebook or Messenger is also useful for chatting.' Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: It depends. I prefer face-to-face communication when working with others because it is more effective. However, social media like Facebook or Messenger is also useful for chatting with friends.

建议: In English (Cambodia), use correct vocabulary and clearer expressions. For example, say 'Sometimes I argue with friends because friendships are not always perfect. When disagreements happen, we talk and resolve them to stay close.' This makes your answer more natural and understandable.

示例: Sometimes I argue with my friends because friendships are not always perfect. But when we have disagreements, we talk and solve them so that we can stay close.

× Yes I do because I'm a person who love talking or chatting especially with my friends and my family and I've enjoyed talking with my friends for some topic like funny or seriously.

✓ Yes I do because I'm a person who loves talking or chatting especially with my friends and my family and I've enjoyed talking with my friends about some topics like funny or serious ones.

The verb 'love' should be 'loves' to agree with the singular subject 'a person' (subject-verb agreement). 'Some topic' should be plural 'some topics' because it refers to multiple subjects. 'Seriously' is an adverb but here an adjective 'serious' is needed to describe 'topics'.

× I usually chat with my friend about studying all our experience about something because I think sharing experience and sharing what we have got or what we have through is making us more closer and more comfortable with each other.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about studying all our experiences about something because I think sharing experiences and sharing what we have got or what we have been through is making us closer and more comfortable with each other.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of chatting with multiple people. 'Experience' should be plural 'experiences' when referring to multiple instances. 'More closer' is incorrect; 'closer' alone is sufficient as 'more' is redundant.

× I prefer board because I'm as I say, I'm a person who love talking with other people, but if I have to like have a personal discussion or I want to share my private problems, I prefer chatting with only one close friend.

✓ I prefer board because, as I say, I'm a person who loves talking with other people, but if I have to have a personal discussion or I want to share my private problems, I prefer chatting with only one close friend.

'Love' should be 'loves' to agree with singular subject 'a person'. The phrase 'like have' is incorrect; it should be 'have'.

× It depends because if I have to work with other people I prefer communicate with face to face, but also if I have to communicate in by social media, I think it's a good idea too because you can chat with other people on social media by Facebook or Messenger.

✓ It depends because if I have to work with other people I prefer to communicate face to face, but also if I have to communicate by social media, I think it's a good idea too because you can chat with other people on social media like Facebook or Messenger.

'Prefer' is usually followed by 'to' plus verb infinitive, so 'prefer communicate' should be 'prefer to communicate'. 'In by social media' is incorrect; 'by social media' is correct. 'By Facebook or Messenger' should be 'like Facebook or Messenger' to indicate examples.

× I do sometime because friendship is not always gonna be good with each other or gonna be belong with each other every time.

✓ I do sometimes because friendship is not always going to be good with each other or going to belong with each other every time.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Gonna' is informal; 'going to' is more appropriate. 'Gonna be belong' is incorrect; 'going to belong' is correct.

× So we have some acumen or some confusion about each other.

✓ So we have some arguments or some confusion about each other.

'Acumen' means keen insight, which is incorrect here. The intended word is likely 'arguments' meaning disagreements.

× But when we have acumen we always talk with each other and we get belong to each other again.

✓ But when we have arguments we always talk with each other and we belong to each other again.

'Get belong' is incorrect; 'belong' is a stative verb and does not use 'get'. Also, 'acumen' is incorrect here; 'arguments' fits the context.