聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding filler words like 'umm' and repeated words like 'save save'. Also, directly answer the question first, then briefly explain your reason with clear structure.

示例: I don't really enjoy chatting with friends because I prefer to spend time alone to recharge. This helps me feel more relaxed and focused.

建议: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms like 'prefer to share'. Avoid repeating words such as 'each each other'. Use linking words like 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: When I chat with friends, I usually share our daily lives and the challenges we face, so we can encourage and support each other.

建议: Use more natural expressions like 'one-on-one' instead of '1 to one'. Also, improve sentence flow by using linking words such as 'because' and 'so'. Avoid minor grammar mistakes like 'try all my best' should be 'try my best'.

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of people rather than one-on-one because I am shy and not very talkative. So, with a group, we can share different topics and keep the conversation lively.

建议: Make your answer clearer by correcting grammar and sentence structure. For example, use 'which mostly focuses on text' and 'when doing face-to-face communication'. Also, avoid mixing pronouns like 'you' and 'I' in the same sentence.

示例: I prefer communicating via social media because it mostly focuses on text, which gives me more time to think about what I want to say compared to face-to-face conversations.

建议: Improve grammar by using correct verb tenses and articles, for example, 'debated over topics' and 'different points of view'. Also, combine sentences using linking words like 'and' or 'which' to make the answer more coherent.

示例: When I was young, I often argued with friends by debating different topics and sharing various points of view, which sometimes led to conflicts when discussions became more vigorous.

× I prefer umm, take my time and yeah, save save the time for myself.

✓ I prefer umm, taking my time and yeah, saving the time for myself.

After the verb 'prefer', when expressing a general preference, the gerund form (-ing) of the verb should be used. Therefore, 'take' and 'save' should be changed to 'taking' and 'saving' respectively to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer share our daily lives and also the challenges we face.

✓ I prefer sharing our daily lives and also the challenges we face.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by a gerund (-ing form) when expressing a general preference. Hence, 'share' should be corrected to 'sharing'.

× So through the conversation we can encourage each each other and also show them our support.

✓ So through the conversation we can encourage each other and also show our support.

The phrase 'each each other' is incorrect; it should be 'each other'. Also, 'show them our support' is redundant because 'each other' already refers to the people involved. Therefore, 'show our support' is clearer and more appropriate.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people instead of 1 to one as I am not a very talkative person.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people instead of one-to-one as I am not a very talkative person.

The phrase '1 to one' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'one-to-one' to describe a conversation between two people. Also, 'one-to-one' should be hyphenated as it functions as a compound adjective here.

× I would try all my best to avoid any dead air and with a bunch of friends we can share different topics.

✓ I would try my best to avoid any dead air and with a bunch of friends we can share different topics.

The phrase 'try all my best' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'try my best'. No gerund correction is needed here, but the phrase needed fixing for idiomatic usage.

× Personally, I'm not a very fast thinker so I prefer using social media which mostly focus on text, which allows me to have more time to think of what I want to say when you're doing one face to face.

✓ Personally, I'm not a very fast thinker so I prefer using social media which mostly focuses on text, which allows me to have more time to think about what I want to say when you're doing one face to face.

The verb 'focus' should be in the third person singular form 'focuses' to agree with the singular subject 'social media'. Also, 'think of' is better expressed as 'think about' in this context for clarity.

× ...when you're doing one face to face.

✓ ...when you're doing one face-to-face conversation.

The phrase 'doing one face to face' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'doing one face-to-face conversation' or 'having a face-to-face conversation'. Also, 'face-to-face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective.

× When I was young I argued a lot with friends with debate over topics and shared different points of views.

✓ When I was young I argued a lot with friends, debated over topics and shared different points of view.

The phrase 'with debate over topics' is incorrect; it should be 'debated over topics' to use the past tense verb form. Also, 'points of views' should be singular 'points of view'.

× And when the discussion gets more vigorous there will lead to a conflict.

✓ And when the discussion gets more vigorous, it will lead to a conflict.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' before 'will lead'. The correct future tense structure requires a subject followed by 'will' plus base verb.