聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and filler words. Also, use correct grammar and sentence structure, for example, 'I have a close friend named Harjeet, and I like to share my feelings and secrets with her. We work together, so we often chat during work.'

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I have a close friend named Harjeet, and we often share our feelings and secrets. Since we work together, we chat a lot during the day.

建议: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear and complete answer with specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: We usually chat about our daily activities at home. For example, I often pick up Harjeet in my car, and during the drive, we talk about what we did that day.

建议: Make your answer more fluent and clear by removing hesitation and repeating words. Explain your preference with reasons and use linking words.

示例: I prefer chatting with just one friend, Harjeet, because I believe it's better to have one best friend whom I can trust completely.

建议: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Structure your answer clearly with linking words and specific reasons.

示例: I prefer both methods. At work, I like face-to-face conversations because they are more personal, but at home, I use social media to communicate when I have questions or doubts.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Provide specific examples and reasons for your answer.

示例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my coworkers. For instance, if there is a disagreement about work tasks, I prefer to discuss and resolve the issue through argument.

× I have one of my close friend and she's name is Harjeet

✓ I have one of my close friends and her name is Harjeet

The phrase 'one of my close friend' is incorrect because 'one of' should be followed by a plural noun. Also, 'she's name' should be 'her name' because 'name' is a noun possessed by 'her'. The correct form is 'one of my close friends' and 'her name is Harjeet'.

× I always prefer to share my emotions, feelings and all my secrets to her

✓ I always prefer to share my emotions, feelings and all my secrets with her

The verb 'share' is typically followed by the preposition 'with' when indicating the person with whom something is shared. Using 'to' is incorrect in this context. Therefore, 'share ... with her' is the correct form.

× and we should chat a lot

✓ and we do chat a lot

The phrase 'we should chat a lot' implies obligation or recommendation, which is not the intended meaning here. The student likely means that they chat frequently, so 'we do chat a lot' is more appropriate.

× we always chit chat with each other

✓ we always chit-chat with each other

The phrase 'chit chat' should be hyphenated as 'chit-chat' when used as a verb. Also, 'with each other' is correct here, so no change needed for preposition, but hyphenation is important.

× what we are doing at home, what we did at home today

✓ what we are doing at home and what we did at home today

The original sentence lacks a conjunction to connect the two clauses properly. Adding 'and' improves sentence structure and clarity.

× I always make pick, pick her and drop her

✓ I always pick her up and drop her off

The verb 'pick' when referring to collecting someone is usually followed by the particle 'up' ('pick up'), and similarly 'drop' is followed by 'off' ('drop off'). The original sentence omits these particles, making it incorrect.

× And while we, while I'm driving my car, I always.

✓ And while I'm driving my car, I always ...

The sentence is incomplete and contains redundancy ('while we, while I'm'). It should be simplified to 'while I'm driving my car' followed by the intended action.

× I prefer to chat or talk with just one person and she's Harjeet

✓ I prefer to chat or talk with just one person, and she is Harjeet

The phrase 'she's Harjeet' is a contraction of 'she is Harjeet', which is correct, but adding a comma before 'and' improves clarity. No plural issue here, but punctuation improves sentence flow.

× I can't trust anyone anyone because uh, I think the best friend is only one

✓ I can't trust anyone because, uh, I think the best friend is only one

The repetition of 'anyone' is an error. Removing the duplicate improves clarity. Also, 'the best friend is only one' is acceptable but could be better phrased as 'you only have one best friend' for naturalness.

× I always prefer to use social medias media if I have any like doubt

✓ I always prefer to use social media if I have any doubts

'Social media' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'medias'. Also, 'doubt' should be plural 'doubts' to match 'any'. The corrected sentence uses 'social media' and 'any doubts'.

× Yeah, sometime I argue with my other other friends which with whom we are I am working

✓ Yeah, sometimes I argue with my other friends whom I am working with

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The phrase 'other other friends' is a repetition error. Also, 'which with whom we are I am working' is incorrect; it should be 'whom I am working with'.

× So I'll like if there is happen on the work I always like the guys are doing or if they are guys are doing argument with me in anything I always prefer to argue as

✓ So, if something happens at work, and if the guys argue with me about anything, I always prefer to argue back

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks proper sentence structure and correct verb forms. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses proper grammar and word order.