聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ответ слишком длинный и повторяет слова, что снижает естественность речи. Следует использовать более разнообразную лексику и избегать повторов, а также структурировать ответ более чётко.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows us to share important things like homework and personal secrets. It's always interesting and helps strengthen our friendship.

建议: Ответ слишком общий и содержит неуверенные выражения. Рекомендуется давать более конкретные примеры и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

示例: We usually talk about funny stories or recent events. For example, last week we shared some jokes, which made our conversation very enjoyable.

建议: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Следует улучшить грамматику, использовать связующие слова и более чётко выражать мысли.

示例: It depends on the situation. If I'm with my close friends, I prefer chatting with the whole group. However, if I'm with acquaintances, I usually talk to just one close friend.

建议: Ответ содержит ошибки и повторения. Рекомендуется использовать более точные выражения и улучшить связность речи.

示例: I prefer both methods depending on the person. For close friends, I like face-to-face conversations, but for others, I usually communicate through social media.

建议: Ответ немного неясен и содержит ошибки. Следует использовать более точные слова и структурировать ответ, чтобы он был понятнее.

示例: Sometimes we argue, which is normal among friends. For instance, when choosing drinks at a shop, we might disagree but usually find a compromise in the end.

× we can talk about everything with my friends

✓ we can talk about everything to my friends

The correct preposition after 'talk' when indicating the person you speak to is 'to', not 'with'. 'Talk with' implies a mutual conversation, but here the phrase suggests the topics discussed to friends, so 'talk to' is more appropriate.

× we can discuss something important for us about homework or about secrets you can share with my friends

✓ we can discuss something important to us about homework or secrets that we can share with my friends

The preposition 'for' should be 'to' when indicating something important to someone. Also, 'about secrets you can share with my friends' is awkward; it should be 'secrets that we can share with my friends' to clarify the subject and object.

× We usually chat about funny things with my friends

✓ We usually chat about funny things with my friends

This sentence is correct; no preposition error here.

× If it's my really close friends, I prefer talk all of them

✓ If they are my really close friends, I prefer to talk to all of them

The phrase 'prefer talk all of them' is incorrect. It should be 'prefer to talk to all of them'. The verb 'prefer' is followed by 'to' plus the base verb. Also, 'talk to' is the correct preposition when indicating the people you speak with.

× If it's not my close friends I prefer to chat with my best friend

✓ If they are not my close friends, I prefer to chat with my best friend

The subject 'it' is incorrect when referring to multiple friends; 'they' should be used. Also, a comma is needed after the conditional clause for clarity.

× If it's my close friend I can talk with him or her face to face

✓ If it's my close friend, I can talk to him or her face to face

The correct preposition after 'talk' when indicating the person is 'to', not 'with'. Also, a comma is needed after the conditional clause.

× but I'm not familiar to my to other person I prefer via social media

✓ but I'm not familiar with other people, I prefer to communicate via social media

The phrase 'familiar to' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'familiar with'. Also, 'my to other person' is incorrect and should be 'other people'. The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to communicate' for clarity.

× we can argue about everything where it's really normal between friends

✓ we can argue about everything, which is really normal between friends

The word 'where' is incorrectly used; it should be 'which' to refer to the previous clause. Also, a comma is needed before 'which'.

× at the shop we can prefer something to drink

✓ at the shop, we can choose something to drink

The verb 'prefer' is incorrectly used here; 'choose' is more appropriate when selecting something. Also, a comma is needed after 'at the shop'.