聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid repetition and unclear phrases. For example, "talking wisdom" is not natural English. Also, keep your answer concise and clear, avoiding redundancy such as "helps helps". Use simple, natural expressions and check grammar carefully.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends when we meet at a coffee shop during our free time. Talking with them helps me relax and learn interesting things.

建议: Focus on clarity and grammar. Avoid awkward phrasing like "the hobbies that what things we enjoy to do recently." Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Be specific and concise.

示例: I usually talk about hobbies we enjoy recently, such as playing water polo on weekends. Sometimes, we share interesting stories about each other's boyfriends.

建议: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary. Avoid phrases like "makes the atmosphere lovely" which is unnatural. Use linking words like "because" and "also" properly. Be more precise and avoid redundancy.

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it creates a lively atmosphere and allows me to learn different things. Also, having more people means more topics to discuss.

建议: Work on grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly. For example, "because" and "and" should be used carefully. Avoid mistakes like "can makes me more clearly."

示例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it helps me understand others' moods through their expressions and body language. Also, it allows me to express my ideas more clearly.

建议: Avoid repetition and improve grammar. For example, "cause" should be "because," and "take take" is a repetition error. Use linking words like "for example" and "sometimes" appropriately. Be more precise in your explanations.

示例: Yes, we sometimes argue because of small things. For example, we often disagree about what to eat for lunch or which shops to visit. Also, our tastes differ, so we sometimes argue when taking photos.

× I find that talking wisdom not only helps helps me relax, but also allows me to learn about more interesting things.

✓ I find that talking wisely not only helps me relax, but also allows me to learn about more interesting things.

The word 'wisdom' is a noun and cannot be used as an adverb to modify the verb 'talking'. The correct adverb form is 'wisely'. Also, the word 'helps' was repeated twice, so one instance was removed.

× I usually talk about the hobbies that what things we enjoy to do recently, such as playing water polo together at the weekend.

✓ I usually talk about the hobbies and things we have enjoyed doing recently, such as playing water polo together at the weekend.

The phrase 'the hobbies that what things' is incorrect and redundant. It should be simplified to 'the hobbies and things'. Also, 'enjoy to do' is incorrect; the correct form is 'have enjoyed doing' to express recent activities.

× Sometimes we also talk about interesting stories related to each other's boyfriends.

✓ Sometimes we also talk about interesting stories related to each other's boyfriends.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because it makes the atmosphere lovely and I think talk with more people can make me learn more different kinds of knowledge.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because it makes the atmosphere lovely and I think talking with more people can help me learn more different kinds of knowledge.

After 'I think', the verb should be in the '-ing' form ('talking') to function as a gerund. Also, 'make me learn' is better expressed as 'help me learn' for naturalness.

× And sometimes the group of people can make us have more topics.

✓ And sometimes the group of people can give us more topics to talk about.

The phrase 'make us have more topics' is awkward. It is better to say 'give us more topics to talk about' for clarity and natural expression.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to understand each other's mood and emotions through their expressions and body language and I also think it can makes me more clearly to express my ideas.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to understand others' moods and emotions through their expressions and body language, and I also think it helps me express my ideas more clearly.

The phrase 'each other's mood and emotions' is incorrect here; 'others' moods and emotions' is appropriate. 'Can makes' is incorrect; it should be 'helps' or 'can help'. Also, 'more clearly to express' should be 'express more clearly' for correct adverb placement.

× Yes, we always argue mainly cause a lot of little things.

✓ Yes, we always argue mainly because of a lot of little things.

'Cause' is informal and incorrect here; 'because of' is the correct prepositional phrase to explain reasons.

× For example, we often disagree about what to eat for lunch or which shops to visit.

✓ For example, we often disagree about what to eat for lunch or which shops to visit.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× And sometimes our aesthetics is different, so when we take take the photos we have some arguments.

✓ And sometimes our aesthetics are different, so when we take photos we have some arguments.

The subject 'aesthetics' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'take take' is a repeated word and should be corrected to 'take'.