聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'just watch that'. Try to avoid fillers and be more precise. Also, keep your answer concise and directly address the question.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially through texting because I find it more comfortable than video calls.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Avoid vague phrases like 'stupid topic' and be more specific about the topics you discuss.

示例: We usually chat about everyday things, like sharing funny videos or catching up on each other's lives, which often leads to interesting discussions.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct grammar and more natural expressions. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: I definitely prefer chatting with only one friend because I am introverted and selective, so I trust only a few people with my personal matters.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has some unclear phrases like 'a desert, a friend'. Try to avoid repetition and use clearer vocabulary. Also, organize your answer with linking words for better flow.

示例: It depends; I prefer face-to-face communication with my closest friends, but for acquaintances I rarely talk to, I usually use social media.

建议: Your answer has some incomplete sentences and unclear ideas. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid repetition and improve grammar.

示例: To be honest, I argue quite often with my closest friends because it helps strengthen our relationship, but with others, I am usually very serious and reserved.

× Yes, I'm obsessed with uh, texting more than this video calling.

✓ Yes, I'm obsessed with texting more than video calling.

The phrase 'this video calling' is incorrect because 'video calling' is an uncountable noun here and does not need the determiner 'this'. Removing 'this' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Is usually in a very stupid topic that we just have conversation about.

✓ It is usually about a very silly topic that we just have a conversation about.

The original sentence lacks a subject and uses 'stupid' which is less appropriate than 'silly' in this context. Adding 'It is' as the subject and correcting the adjective improves clarity and grammar.

× Is mainly related to like we share each other some reals or just catching up on each other's life.

✓ It is mainly related to sharing some reels with each other or just catching up on each other's lives.

The phrase 'related to like we share each other some reals' is incorrect. 'Related to' should be followed by a noun or gerund. Also, 'reals' should be 'reels' (assuming social media videos), and 'life' should be plural 'lives' when referring to multiple people.

× I'll tuition I'll say is definitely always the simple test that just leads to a big discussion.

✓ I would say it is definitely always a simple text that just leads to a big discussion.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors like 'I'll tuition I'll say'. Replacing it with 'I would say it is' and correcting 'simple test' to 'simple text' clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar.

× And because I'm very introvert and selective persons, I feel that I can rely on only few people that I can fully trust on everythings.

✓ And because I'm a very introverted and selective person, I feel that I can rely on only a few people that I can fully trust with everything.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes singular and plural forms. 'Introvert' should be 'introverted' adjective, 'persons' should be singular 'person' to match 'I'm', 'few' should be 'a few', and 'everythings' should be 'everything'. Also, 'trust on' should be 'trust with'.

× But if the person is that I'm not very close, a desert, a friend that I talk on very rare occasions, I just like to just communicate with them through social media.

✓ But if the person is someone I'm not very close to, a distant friend that I talk to on very rare occasions, I just like to communicate with them through social media.

The phrase 'person is that I'm not very close' is incorrect; it should be 'someone I'm not very close to'. 'Desert' is likely a mishearing of 'distant'. Also, 'talk on' should be 'talk to'. These corrections fix preposition and word choice errors.

× To be honest, yes a lot.

✓ To be honest, yes, a lot.

Adding a comma after 'yes' improves readability and corrects punctuation in this short response.

× But for others, for people I really know, I'm the most serious person ever.

✓ But for others, for people I don't really know, I'm the most serious person ever.

The original sentence contradicts itself by saying 'people I really know' but implying a different behavior. Changing to 'people I don't really know' clarifies the meaning and corrects the pronoun usage.

× But from my closest friends I feel like I will.

✓ But with my closest friends, I feel like I will.

The phrase 'from my closest friends' is incorrect in this context; 'with my closest friends' is appropriate. Also, the sentence is incomplete; it likely means 'I will argue' or similar, but as per instruction, only grammar is corrected.

× Also makes you relationship much more stronger in a friendship I think.

✓ It also makes your relationship much stronger in a friendship, I think.

The sentence lacks a subject; adding 'It' fixes this. 'You relationship' should be 'your relationship'. 'Much more stronger' is redundant; 'much stronger' is correct.