聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, explain why you prefer phone calls over chatting and give specific reasons.

示例: No, I don't like chatting much. I prefer calling my friends because it's quicker and more effective for organising plans and discussing important matters.

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, try to be more specific about the topics you discuss.

示例: When I chat with friends, we usually organise our next meeting or trip. I also like to share details about my day, work, or any new experiences I've had.

建议: Your answer addresses the question well but could be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. Also, try to avoid repetition and be more concise.

示例: It depends on the topic. For important matters, I prefer chatting one-on-one with my best friend. However, for organising social events like a night out, I use group chats.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and filler words. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to explain your preference with specific reasons.

示例: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to understand the tone and body language. The atmosphere is more natural, and jokes come across better in person.

建议: Your answer is quite unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain with specific examples, avoiding filler words and unclear phrases.

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions on certain topics. If they do something I dislike, I express my feelings calmly to resolve the issue.

× I prefer to call them and make a conversation from the phone and because I think it's more what do we want? Quickly to organize your plans and learn all the things that you want because from the that setting.

✓ I prefer to call them and have a conversation on the phone because I think it's quicker to organise plans and learn all the things you want from that setting.

The phrase 'make a conversation' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'have a conversation'. Also, 'from the phone' should be 'on the phone' as the preposition 'on' is used with phone conversations. The sentence structure was also unclear and has been corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× When I decide to chat, uh, probably we're gonna start organize the next meeting or the next, uh, travel that we want to make or I'm gonna tell them about my day, about my work or anything new that I, I have.

✓ When I decide to chat, probably we're going to start organising the next meeting or the next trip that we want to make, or I'm going to tell them about my day, my work, or anything new that I have.

The phrase 'we're gonna start organize' is incorrect; after 'start' the verb should be in the -ing form ('organising'). Also, 'travel' should be 'trip' as 'travel' is uncountable and 'trip' is the correct noun here. 'Gonna' is informal and has been expanded to 'going to' for correctness.

× It's depend from the thing that I want to chat.

✓ It depends on the thing that I want to chat about.

The verb 'depend' requires the preposition 'on', not 'from'. Also, 'depend' should be in the third person singular form 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Additionally, 'chat' is usually followed by 'about' when indicating the topic.

× It's depend from the thing that I want to chat.

✓ It depends on the thing that I want to chat about.

The subject 'It' requires the verb 'depend' to be in the third person singular form 'depends' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× If it's something important that I don't, I don't want to tell to all my friends.

✓ If it's something important, I don't want to tell all my friends.

The verb 'tell' does not require the preposition 'to' when followed directly by an object (someone). Therefore, 'tell to all my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'tell all my friends'.

× But when it's something they like to organize a a night out or something like that, I prefer the group chat.

✓ But when it's something like organizing a night out or something like that, I prefer the group chat.

The phrase 'they like to organize a a night out' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It should be 'something like organizing a night out' to correctly express the idea. Also, the repeated 'a a' is a typographical error.

× Of course, face to face, I think it's more easy.

✓ Of course, face to face, I think it's easier.

The phrase 'more easy' is incorrect; the correct comparative form of 'easy' is 'easier'. Also, 'face to face' is correct as an adverbial phrase here.

× I think the vibe from face to face different and the jokes that you wanna, you wanna do everything, it's different.

✓ I think the vibe from face-to-face communication is different, and the jokes you want to make, everything is different.

The sentence was unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective ('face-to-face communication'). The verb 'do' is incorrect in this context; 'make' is the correct verb collocated with 'jokes'. The sentence has been restructured for clarity.

× Yes, of course I argue with my friends because we have a lot of different opinions, uh, about the same uh, theme.

✓ Yes, of course I argue with my friends because we have a lot of different opinions about the same topic.

The word 'theme' is less commonly used in this context; 'topic' is more appropriate. The sentence is otherwise correct in present tense.

× And when I am when, uh, they are doing something that I don't like, of course I'm gonna tell them I'm gonna argue about that.

✓ And when they do something that I don't like, of course I'm going to tell them and argue about it.

The phrase 'when I am when' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'when they do'. 'Gonna' is informal and has been changed to 'going to'. The sentence has been restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.