聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误，如“more closer”应为“closer”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意形容词比较级的正确使用。

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me understand their thoughts and hobbies, which makes our relationship closer.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“chat study”应为“chat about study”或“discuss studies”。建议使用完整句子，注意单复数和冠词的正确使用，表达更自然。

示例: I usually chat with my friends about our studies because as college students, we need to focus on our subjects and complete our homework.

建议: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，正确使用连接词，避免语法错误，使表达更连贯。

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I can get more ideas and valuable advice from them.

建议: 回答中表达不够自然，且有语法错误，如“communicate with social media”应为“communicate via social media”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构。

示例: I prefer to communicate via social media because we can use tools like Word, PowerPoint, and Excel to help solve problems during our discussions.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“Different peoples”应为“Different people”，“Which one do you like we?”不合语法。建议使用正确的句子结构，表达更清晰。

示例: Yes, I do argue with my friends because we have different opinions. For example, we might debate about whether chocolate or sweets are better.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because by chatting with them I can learn what they are thinking and I can learn their hobbies and our relationship will be more closer.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because by chatting with them I can learn what they are thinking and I can learn their hobbies and our relationship will be closer.

“more closer”是错误的比较级用法，形容词“close”的比较级是“closer”，不需要加“more”。

× I often chat study with my friends.

✓ I often chat about study with my friends.

“chat study”缺少介词，应为“chat about study”表示“聊天关于学习”。

× Because we are college student students, we should focus on some subjects and complete our homework, so I often chat study with my friend.

✓ Because we are college students, we should focus on some subjects and complete our homework, so I often chat about study with my friends.

“student students”重复且错误，应为复数“students”；“chat study”缺少介词，应为“chat about study”；“friend”应为复数“friends”与前文一致。

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because more people, more ideals we I can get some more valuable advice from them and which can make me so to.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because the more people, the more ideas I can get from them, and that can help me a lot.

原句结构混乱，缺少连词和正确的表达，应使用“the more... the more...”结构，且“ideals”应为“ideas”，句尾表达不清晰，改为“help me a lot”。

× I like to communicate with social media because we can use computers to tools like Word, PPT and Excel to help us solve our problems when we discuss.

✓ I like to communicate via social media because we can use computer tools like Word, PPT and Excel to help us solve our problems when we discuss.

“communicate with social media”应为“communicate via social media”；“computers to tools”错误，应为“computer tools”。

× Absolutely. Different peoples have different ideas.

✓ Absolutely. Different people have different ideas.

“peoples”通常指不同民族，这里应使用“people”表示“人们”的复数形式。

× So to get a common opinion we often argue with others, for example chocolate or sweet.

✓ So to reach a common opinion, we often argue with others, for example, about chocolate or sweets.

缺少介词“about”，且“sweet”应为复数“sweets”，句子结构需调整使表达更清晰。

× Which one do you like we?

✓ Which one do you like?

句尾多余“we”，应删除以形成正确疑问句。