聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, be careful with contradictory statements; you said you don't like phone calls but then mentioned calling your friend for an hour. Make your answer clear and concise within 5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends during my free time because it helps me relax. I prefer texting over phone calls since it's more convenient. For instance, yesterday I spent an hour texting my best friend about our plans for the weekend.

建议: Reduce the use of filler words and try to give more specific details to make your answer richer. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition.

示例: Usually, I chat with my friends about my studies and sometimes family issues. For example, yesterday I discussed some difficult topics in my coursework that I didn't understand, and my friend helped me clarify them.

建议: Work on sentence structure and grammar, such as subject-verb agreement and word order. Avoid filler words and try to express your ideas more clearly and fluently. Use linking words to connect your reasons and examples.

示例: Honestly, I prefer chatting with only one friend because group conversations can be confusing with many opinions. For example, yesterday I discussed my coursework with a close friend who understands me well.

建议: Improve grammar by using correct prepositions and verb forms, such as 'communicate face-to-face' and 'one of my best friends lives in the USA.' Also, try to make your sentences more concise and avoid redundancy.

示例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more personal. However, since one of my best friends lives in the USA, we often use social media to stay in touch.

建议: Clarify your ideas and use correct vocabulary; 'injured person' is incorrect here. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to explain your points logically.

示例: Although I sometimes get angry, it does not affect my friendships. We rarely argue; instead, we try to understand each other's views and stay calm during disagreements.

× I don't like call, uh, phone calls or uh, anything.

✓ I don't like making phone calls or anything.

The verb 'like' when followed by another verb should be followed by the gerund form '-ing'. So, 'like call' should be 'like making calls'. This is a common structure in English to express preferences.

× Yesterday I was umm, calling with my best friend for an hour and I really like most chatting.

✓ Yesterday I was calling my best friend for an hour and I really like chatting the most.

The phrase 'calling with' is incorrect; it should be 'calling' without 'with'. Also, 'like most chatting' is awkward; the correct expression is 'like chatting the most'. The past continuous 'was calling' is correct here.

× Usually I chat with my friends about my studies or uh, like family problems.

✓ Usually I chat with my friends about my studies or family problems.

The word 'like' is unnecessary here and causes confusion. Removing 'like' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yesterday I was uh, talking about, uh, talking to her about uh, study related things that I don't understand.

✓ Yesterday I was talking to her about study-related things that I don't understand.

The repetition of 'talking about, talking to her' is redundant. Also, 'study related' should be hyphenated as 'study-related' when used as an adjective.

× Honestly, I prefer chat with only one friend because in groups there are so many people and they give their own opinion.

✓ Honestly, I prefer chatting with only one friend because in groups there are so many people and they give their own opinions.

After 'prefer', the gerund form 'chatting' is required. Also, 'opinion' should be plural 'opinions' because 'many people' have multiple opinions.

× Yesterday just I talk about uh, uh, coursework with my friends and she knows well and she understand me with great.

✓ Yesterday I just talked about coursework with my friend; she knows well and she understands me very well.

The past tense 'talk' should be 'talked' to match 'yesterday'. 'She understand' should be 'she understands' for subject-verb agreement. 'With great' is incorrect; 'very well' is appropriate.

× Honestly, I prefer communicate by face to face, but sometimes we don't have time or sometimes we live far away, we have to communicate with social media.

✓ Honestly, I prefer communicating face to face, but sometimes we don't have time or we live far away, so we have to communicate via social media.

After 'prefer', the gerund 'communicating' is needed. 'By face to face' is incorrect; 'face to face' is an adverbial phrase and does not need 'by'. 'Communicate with social media' should be 'communicate via social media'.

× One of my best friend Live USA and I have to communicate with her via social media.

✓ One of my best friends lives in the USA and I have to communicate with her via social media.

'One of my best friend' should be 'one of my best friends' because 'one of' is followed by plural noun. 'Live' should be 'lives' for third person singular. 'Live USA' needs preposition 'in the USA'.

× Although I am a very injured person but uh, my anger issue didn't affect our friendship.

✓ Although I am a very sensitive person, my anger issues didn't affect our friendship.

'Injured' is incorrect here; likely the intended word is 'sensitive'. Also, 'anger issue' should be plural 'anger issues'. The conjunction 'but' is unnecessary after 'although'.

× We don't argue with others but sometimes we jumble to each others but we uh prefer to understand the situation and stay calm so I we don't argue.

✓ We don't argue with others, but sometimes we jumble with each other. However, we prefer to understand the situation and stay calm, so we don't argue.

'Jumble to each others' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'jumble with each other'. 'Each other' is singular reciprocal pronoun. Also, 'I we' is a mistake; it should be 'we'. The sentence is split for clarity.