聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và hoàn thành câu một cách đầy đủ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a long day of studying.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác như "some problem about my high school". Hãy dùng các liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

示例: Usually, I chat with my friends about problems at school and family matters. Besides that, I also talk about my boyfriend, which helps us bond better.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "it feel" nên là "it feels". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích thêm lý do để câu trả lời tự nhiên và đầy đủ hơn.

示例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it feels more private, and I can express myself freely without worrying about others.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự liên kết giữa các câu. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác như "face to face with other" và hoàn chỉnh câu để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: As an introvert, I prefer communicating via social media because it allows me to talk confidently without feeling shy in face-to-face conversations.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "some problem". Hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, we sometimes argue about problems at school, such as tests and exams, but we always resolve our disagreements quickly.

× Certainly am a big fan of it because it can have me relax after a long day of study and.

✓ Certainly, I am a big fan of it because it can help me relax after a long day of study.

The original sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'am'. Also, 'have me relax' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'help me relax'. The sentence should be in present tense to match the context.

× I often chat with my friends some problem about my high school, uh, my families.

✓ I often chat with my friends about some problems related to my high school and my family.

The preposition 'about' should be placed before 'some problems'. Also, 'families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Beside I also talk with her about my boyfriend.

✓ Besides, I also talk with them about my boyfriend.

'Beside' should be 'Besides' to mean 'in addition'. 'Her' is incorrect as the pronoun should refer to 'friends' (plural), so 'them' is appropriate.

× To be honest I'm keen on chatting with one friend because it feel like private and I can say what I want.

✓ To be honest, I'm keen on chatting with one friend because it feels private and I can say what I want.

The verb 'feel' should be 'feels' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Present tense is used here.

× I don't really like face to face with other UMM.

✓ I don't really like face-to-face communication with others.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective or noun. 'With other UMM' is unclear; 'with others' is more appropriate.

× I really love chatting on social media because I can. Talking with them in a confident.

✓ I really love chatting on social media because I can talk with them confidently.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly uses a period. 'Talking' should be 'talk' to complete the sentence, and 'in a confident' should be 'confidently' (an adverb).

× Certainly, yes, we have argued about some problem in high school such as UMM test and exam.

✓ Certainly, yes, we have argued about some problems in high school such as tests and exams.

'Problem' should be plural 'problems' to match 'some'. 'UMM test and exam' should be pluralized as 'tests and exams' for consistency. Present perfect tense 'have argued' is correct here.