聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar, such as 'I'm fond of the idea of getting close to someone through text messages.' Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me stay close to them, especially since many of them live in different cities around the world. Text messaging is the fastest and most convenient way to keep in touch.

建议: Your answer lists topics but lacks clear structure and linking words. Try to organize your ideas using linking words like 'such as' or 'for example' and avoid listing without connection. Also, use plural forms correctly and improve sentence flow.

示例: We usually chat about various topics, such as recent news, memes, cultural events, video games, and books that entertain us.

建议: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct expressions like 'one-on-one chats' instead of '1 to 1 chattings.' Also, clarify your reasons with better linking words and grammar.

示例: I usually prefer one-on-one chats rather than group conversations because I feel the other person listens to me better and I am not interrupted by others.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains run-on sentences and some grammar errors. Try to break your answer into shorter sentences and use correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: I usually prefer face-to-face communication with my friends because I can see their reactions immediately. This helps me understand their emotions and respond politely if I say something wrong.

建议: Your answer is brief and has grammatical errors. Try to expand your answer with more details and use correct grammar, such as plural forms and articles. Also, explain how you keep positive vibes during arguments.

示例: Yes, sometimes we argue when discussing sensitive topics and have different opinions about a situation. However, we always try to keep a positive atmosphere and respect each other's views.

× I'm fond of idea of getting close with someone through the text messages.

✓ I'm fond of the idea of getting close to someone through text messages.

The phrase 'fond of idea' requires the definite article 'the' before 'idea' because it refers to a specific concept. Also, 'getting close with someone' should be 'getting close to someone' as the correct preposition is 'to' in this context. Additionally, 'the text messages' should be 'text messages' without 'the' because it refers to text messages in general, not specific ones.

× I'm fond of idea of getting close with someone through the text messages.

✓ I'm fond of the idea of getting close to someone through text messages.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect after 'getting close'; the correct preposition is 'to'. Also, 'through the text messages' should be 'through text messages' as the definite article 'the' is unnecessary here.

× They are all around the world and it's the fastest way to reach them out.

✓ They are all around the world and it's the fastest way to reach out to them.

The verb phrase 'reach out' requires the preposition 'to' after it. The original sentence incorrectly places 'out' after 'them'. The correct structure is 'reach out to someone'.

× Very often we discuss general topics or recent news or memes or cultural events and video games, books, something that entertain us.

✓ Very often, we discuss general topics, recent news, memes, cultural events, video games, books, or something that entertains us.

The original sentence has awkward coordination and missing commas. Items in a list should be separated by commas, and 'something that entertain us' should be 'something that entertains us' to agree with the singular subject 'something'. Also, adding 'or' before the last item clarifies the list.

× I usually prefer 1 to 1 chattings with the person then with large group of people, because therefore I see that the person hear me and is not interrupted by other.

✓ I usually prefer one-to-one chatting with a person rather than with a large group of people because I feel that the person hears me and is not interrupted by others.

The phrase '1 to 1 chattings' is incorrect; 'one-to-one chatting' is the proper expression. 'Then' should be 'than' for comparison. 'Large group of people' needs the article 'a'. 'Hear' should be 'hears' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. 'Other' should be 'others' to refer to other people.

× I usually prefer 1 to 1 chattings with the person then with large group of people, because therefore I see that the person hear me and is not interrupted by other.

✓ I usually prefer one-to-one chatting with a person rather than with a large group of people because I feel that the person hears me and is not interrupted by others.

The verb 'hear' must be in the third person singular form 'hears' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. Also, 'other' should be plural 'others' to refer to other people.

× I usually prefer 1 to 1 chattings with the person then with large group of people, because therefore I see that the person hear me and is not interrupted by other.

✓ I usually prefer one-to-one chatting with a person rather than with a large group of people because I feel that the person hears me and is not interrupted by others.

The word 'then' is incorrectly used instead of 'than' for comparison. Also, 'because therefore' is redundant; only one conjunction is needed, so 'because' suffices.

× I prefer to communicate with people and my friends face to face usually because I can see their reaction immediately, I can tell their emotion and be more polite if I said something wrong and I immediately see respond to it.

✓ I prefer to communicate with people and my friends face to face usually because I can see their reactions immediately, I can tell their emotions, and be more polite if I say something wrong and immediately see their response to it.

'Reaction' and 'emotion' should be plural to match the plural subject 'people and my friends'. 'If I said' should be 'if I say' to maintain present tense. 'See respond' is incorrect; it should be 'see their response'. Also, commas are needed to separate clauses properly.

× I prefer to communicate with people and my friends face to face usually because I can see their reaction immediately, I can tell their emotion and be more polite if I said something wrong and I immediately see respond to it.

✓ I prefer to communicate with people and my friends face to face usually because I can see their reactions immediately, I can tell their emotions, and be more polite if I say something wrong and immediately see their response to it.

The pronoun 'their' correctly refers to 'people and my friends', but 'respond' is a verb and should be replaced with the noun 'response' to fit the sentence structure.

× Yes, when we're discussing spicy topics and have different opinion about situation we are arguing but always keep positive vibes.

✓ Yes, when we're discussing spicy topics and have different opinions about situations, we argue but always keep positive vibes.

'Have different opinion' should be 'have different opinions' to match plural form. 'About situation' should be 'about situations' for general meaning. 'We are arguing' is better as 'we argue' to express habitual action. Also, commas are needed for clarity.