聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and complete by avoiding pauses and incomplete sentences. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it allows quick and convenient communication. Moreover, since it's written, we don't have to worry about pronunciation, which makes it easier to express our thoughts clearly.

建议: Make your answer more structured by starting with a clear topic sentence and then adding specific details with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'something' and try to use more precise vocabulary.

示例: Usually, we chat about how our day has been. For example, my friend Raji and I often discuss what he has been doing throughout the day, including whether he has eaten or not.

建议: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repetition and be more concise.

示例: I prefer chatting with one person rather than a group because group chats can be messy and it's often difficult to follow who is saying what. Therefore, one-on-one chats are clearer and more manageable.

建议: Try to avoid hesitation and unclear phrases. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and correct minor grammar mistakes for better clarity.

示例: If I have a choice, I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows better understanding of emotions and reduces the chances of misunderstandings. Therefore, I find it more effective than communicating via social media.

建议: Make your answer more fluent by using linking words and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and express your ideas more precisely.

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions. We do this to express our points clearly and help each other understand different perspectives. I believe arguing in this way is healthy and not a bad thing.

× Yes, I do like chatting with friends because we can.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with friends because we can chat.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'because we can' which is incomplete. The verb 'chatting' is correct as a gerund here, but the phrase 'because we can' needs a verb to complete the meaning. Adding 'chat' clarifies the action intended.

× It's uh, we just have to write what we want to communicate with others.

✓ It's uh, we just have to write what we want to communicate to others.

The verb 'communicate' is usually followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating the recipient of the communication. Using 'with' is incorrect in this context.

× For an example my friend Raji, when we talk we usually chat about what he is doing and what he has done in in the whole day.

✓ For example, my friend Raji, when we talk we usually chat about what he is doing and what he has done throughout the whole day.

The phrase 'For an example' is incorrect; it should be 'For example'. Also, 'in in the whole day' is incorrect; 'throughout the whole day' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate the entire day.

× Has he eaten the food? Something.

✓ Has he eaten the food or something?

The sentence fragment 'Something.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'or something' connects it properly to the previous question, making the sentence coherent.

× I prefer to chat with the one people rather than chatting with a group of people because in a in a group it becomes messy and it requires a lot of effort to understand whose message is this.

✓ I prefer to chat with one person rather than chatting with a group of people because in a group it becomes messy and it requires a lot of effort to understand whose message this is.

'The one people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and 'one' is singular. The correct phrase is 'one person'. Also, 'whose message is this' should be 'whose message this is' to follow correct word order in indirect questions.

× So I prefer chatting with one people rather than in the group.

✓ So I prefer chatting with one person rather than in the group.

Again, 'one people' is incorrect; 'people' is plural, so 'one person' is the correct singular form.

× If I if I have a choice to communicate with the people face to face through social media, I would prefer face to face communication as it allows better communication, you can understand the others emotion and the chances of misunderstanding reduces.

✓ If I have a choice to communicate with people face to face or through social media, I would prefer face to face communication as it allows better communication; you can understand others' emotions and the chances of misunderstanding reduce.

The original sentence has redundancy ('If I if I'), incorrect preposition use ('face to face through social media' is contradictory), and punctuation errors. Also, 'others emotion' should be 'others' emotions' to show possession, and 'reduces' should be 'reduce' to agree with plural subject 'chances'.

× That's why I prefer face to face with mitigation.

✓ That's why I prefer face-to-face communication without mediation.

The phrase 'with mitigation' is unclear and likely incorrect in this context. Possibly, the intended meaning is 'without mediation' or 'without misunderstanding'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective.

× Yes, I do argue with my friends when we don't have a common view about something at that time.

✓ Yes, I do argue with my friends when we don't have a common view about something at that time.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× We argue so that we can understand or put forward our point and make it other people or other friends to understand it.

✓ We argue so that we can understand or put forward our point and make other people or friends understand it.

The phrase 'make it other people or other friends to understand it' is awkward and incorrect. The corrected sentence removes unnecessary words and uses the correct infinitive form 'make other people or friends understand it'.