聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question without redundancy. For example, you can say, "Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me share stories and thoughts about our daily lives."

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me share stories and thoughts about our daily lives.

建议: Avoid repeating the same idea and unnecessary phrases like 'because I'm a girl'. Instead, focus on specific topics and use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, "I usually chat about fashion and beauty products, such as dresses, makeup, and shampoos, because these topics interest me."

示例: I usually chat about fashion and beauty products, such as dresses, makeup, and shampoos, because these topics interest me.

建议: Try to structure your answer clearly with linking words and avoid filler words. For example, start with your preference, then explain why with supporting details. Also, avoid repeating the same idea. For instance, "I prefer chatting with one friend because I can share my secrets and personal challenges more comfortably than in a group."

示例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I can share my secrets and personal challenges more comfortably than in a group.

建议: Avoid incomplete sentences and filler words. Make your answer complete and clear by directly stating your preference and reasons. For example, "As an introvert, I prefer communicating via social media because it allows me time to think before responding, unlike face-to-face conversations."

示例: As an introvert, I prefer communicating via social media because it allows me time to think before responding, unlike face-to-face conversations.

建议: Avoid unclear phrases like 'war time saying' and filler sounds. Provide a clear and concise answer with specific reasons. For example, "Yes, I sometimes argue with friends due to disagreements in opinions, which is natural in any friendship."

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends due to disagreements in opinions, which is natural in any friendship.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends mainly because that is a better way to utilise your time.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends mainly because that is a better way to utilise your time.

The sentence is correct as it uses the gerund 'chatting' appropriately after 'like'. No correction needed.

× Uh, we can, uh, share stories with them and have a good conversation about our daily lives and uh, also we can share with them our, uh, uh, thoughts.

✓ We can share stories with them and have a good conversation about our daily lives, and also we can share our thoughts with them.

The sentence is mostly correct but can be improved for clarity and fluency by removing filler words and rearranging phrases. The use of 'share' is correct here.

× I'll have to discuss about all these things because I'm a girl and I would love these things, obviously.

✓ I'll have to discuss all these things because I'm a girl and I would love these things, obviously.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Using 'discuss about' is incorrect. The correct form is 'discuss all these things'.

× I like to chat with one friend because I can share all my thoughts to her or him.

✓ I like to chat with one friend because I can share all my thoughts with her or him.

The verb 'share' is followed by the preposition 'with' when indicating the person receiving the thoughts. Using 'to' is incorrect here.

× Other than chatting with a group of people.

✓ Other than chatting with a group of people,

This is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb or clause. It should be connected to the following sentence or restructured to form a complete sentence.

× Yes, it's good to chat with a group of people, but The thing is, we cannot share all our thoughts with them, our secrets and our, uh, life, uh, challenges.

✓ Yes, it's good to chat with a group of people, but the thing is, we cannot share all our thoughts with them, our secrets, and our life challenges.

The definite article 'The' should not be capitalized mid-sentence. Also, commas are needed for clarity in the list.

× All these things we can share only with a person, right? Not a group.

✓ All these things we can share only with one person, right? Not a group.

Using 'a person' is grammatically correct but 'one person' is more precise when contrasting with 'a group'.

× And basically an introvert.

✓ I am basically an introvert.

This is a sentence fragment missing a subject and verb. Adding 'I am' completes the sentence.

× So I would love to communicate via social media, mainly because we have time to think about what we are writing.

✓ So I would love to communicate through social media, mainly because we have time to think about what we are writing.

Both 'via' and 'through' can be used, but 'through' is more common and natural in this context.

× So when we are chatting with friends, uh, directly or face to face, we cannot, uh, like filter what we are saying.

✓ So when we are chatting with friends directly or face to face, we cannot filter what we are saying.

The phrase 'like filter' is incorrect; 'like' is unnecessary here and should be removed for correct grammar.

× If you have a friend, there will be arguments, mainly because uh, they have uh, disagreements with war time saying and what I have disagreements with what they are saying.

✓ If you have a friend, there will be arguments, mainly because they have disagreements with what I am saying and I have disagreements with what they are saying.

The phrase 'war time saying' is unclear and likely a mishearing or error. Correcting to 'disagreements with what I am saying' clarifies meaning and uses present tense appropriately.