聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use more natural and clear expressions. Avoid repeating phrases like 'play chat' which is incorrect. Use simple and correct verbs like 'chat' or 'talk'. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

示例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends. When I feel bored, I usually call them and we talk about different topics. We share information and enjoy our conversations a lot.

建议: Focus on answering the question directly and clearly. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and unclear phrases like 'play charts' or 'play never use'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about the topics you discuss.

示例: I usually chat with my friends about our homework, especially lessons from our class. We also talk about our daily activities and enjoy spending time together.

建议: Make your preference clear and explain your reasons using correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid confusing phrases like 'play or growth against their a lot of information story'. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: I prefer chatting in a group rather than with just one friend because in a group, we can share more information and stories together.

建议: Answer the question directly and clearly. Use correct expressions for communication methods like 'face-to-face', 'video calls', and 'social media'. Avoid unclear sentences and organize your ideas logically with linking words.

示例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more personal. However, sometimes I use video calls or social media to stay in touch when we cannot meet in person.

建议: Clarify your answer by using correct vocabulary and grammar. Instead of 'ask you' or 'occur', use 'argue'. Keep your sentences simple and clear, and explain why you do not argue with friends.

示例: No, I never argue with my friends. We usually laugh, have fun, and help each other with lessons and research because arguing is not good for our friendship.

× I always play chat with my friend.

✓ I always play chat with my friends.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because 'play chat' usually involves more than one person. Using plural matches the context of chatting with multiple people.

× When I'm bored, I play chat with my friend.

✓ When I'm bored, I play chat with my friends.

Same as above, 'friends' is more appropriate because chatting usually involves more than one friend.

× So we call together, we talk about something together, we share a lot of information to by the chart.

✓ So we call each other, we talk about something together, we share a lot of information by chat.

The phrase 'to by the chart' is incorrect. It should be 'by chat' to indicate the medium of sharing information. Also, 'call together' is better expressed as 'call each other'.

× Every everything we do is in chat.

✓ Everything we do is in chat.

The phrase 'Every everything' is redundant. 'Everything' alone is correct.

× I usually umm, play charts with my friend or to talk about the homework on Doriso lesson and we stay here together, We elaborate together and especially we have a good time together.

✓ I usually umm, play chat with my friends or talk about the homework on Doriso lesson and we stay here together. We elaborate together and especially we have a good time together.

'Charts' should be 'chat' as the activity. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context. Also, 'to talk' should be 'talk' to keep parallel structure.

× One more we play never use it's so.

✓ Also, we never use it to play.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns and structure. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun use.

× This question I met every day I play Chad with my friend and also in Group, but I prefer group then or private because play or growth against their a lot of information story altogether.

✓ Every day I play chat with my friends and also in groups, but I prefer groups rather than private because playing in groups gives a lot of information and stories altogether.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends'. 'Group' should be plural 'groups'. 'Then' should be 'than' for comparison. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar.

× Are you the platform to know how we can go over together?

✓ Do you know the platform where we can go over together?

The original sentence uses incorrect prepositions and structure. The correction uses proper question form and prepositions.

× And sometime I face to face by calling with with my friend on chat and we still meet together in the video and sometime I'm meeting face to face in the public.

✓ And sometimes I face to face call my friends on chat and we still meet together on video, and sometimes I meet face to face in public.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends'. The sentence is corrected for plural and preposition use.

× Ask you. We never ask you together. We never, we never have it.

✓ No, we never argue together. We never have arguments.

'Ask you' is incorrect for 'argue'. The pronouns and verbs are corrected to express the intended meaning.

× We just laugh together, play together and see ya and elaborate on lesson information and do research together.

✓ We just laugh together, play together, and study and do research together.

'See ya' is informal and unclear here. 'Elaborate on lesson information' is better expressed as 'study'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and pronoun use.

× We never occur together. We never use it because it's not good.

✓ We never argue together. We never do it because it's not good.

'Occur' is incorrect for 'argue'. 'Use it' is unclear; corrected to 'do it' to refer to arguing. Pronouns and verbs are corrected.