聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "chat them" (should be "chat with them") and "we really love to engage with each other" which is repetitive. Also, try to limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences for effectiveness.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, mostly through social media apps like Instagram and WhatsApp. We often share updates about our daily lives and stay connected that way.

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid filler words like "that's it". Also, be more specific about the topics you discuss to enrich your response.

示例: We usually chat about our daily lives, including recent events and experiences. Sometimes, we share personal matters or work-related issues, which helps us support each other.

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by avoiding filler phrases like "you know" and by structuring your response more clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

示例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I am an introvert. I find it easier to open up and discuss various topics with her rather than in a group.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Also, the phrase "I like to talk through Sushant Nikhya" is confusing and possibly incorrect. Try to clarify your ideas, use correct grammar, and avoid ambiguous phrases. Use linking words to contrast your preferences.

示例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my family and close friends because it feels more personal. However, with acquaintances or people I don't know well, I usually prefer social media.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and could be more concise. Avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and provide a more natural response.

示例: No, I rarely argue with my friends because we usually agree on most things. Our strong understanding helps us avoid conflicts.

× I usually chat them using social media apps like Instagram, WhatsApp and Facebook and we really love to engage with each other using these apps.

✓ I usually chat with them using social media apps like Instagram, WhatsApp and Facebook and we really love to engage with each other using these apps.

The verb 'chat' requires the preposition 'with' when referring to the person you are chatting to. Omitting 'with' is incorrect in English grammar.

× Well, we usually talk about the life like what is happening and what what has happened with them.

✓ Well, we usually talk about life, like what is happening and what has happened with them.

The phrase 'talk about the life' is incorrect because 'life' here is a general concept and does not need the definite article 'the'. Also, the repeated word 'what' is a typographical error and should be corrected.

× I have only one friend so I love to talk with her about any topic and I can easily open with her too instead of other people.

✓ I have only one friend so I love to talk with her about any topic and I can easily open up to her too instead of other people.

The phrase 'open with her' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'open up to someone' meaning to share your feelings or thoughts. Also, 'instead of other people' is acceptable but 'rather than other people' might be more natural.

× If there are my people like my own people, my family or someone close to, I would like to speak to them face to face.

✓ If there are my people like my own family or someone close to me, I would like to speak to them face to face.

The phrase 'someone close to' is incomplete and requires an object, such as 'me'. Also, 'my own people' is redundant and can be simplified to 'my own family'.

× But other people I do not know about much.

✓ But other people I do not know much about.

The preposition 'about' should be placed at the end of the sentence in this context for natural English word order.

× I like to talk through Sushant Nikhya.

✓ I like to talk through social media apps.

The phrase 'Sushant Nikhya' is unclear and seems to be a mistake or a name that does not fit the context. Replacing it with 'social media apps' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× No, I do not argue with my friends because it's nothing to argue about between us.

✓ No, I do not argue with my friends because there is nothing to argue about between us.

The phrase 'it's nothing to argue about' is incorrect because 'nothing' is a pronoun and requires 'there is' to indicate existence. 'There is nothing to argue about' is the correct form.

× We are almost always we always agree with each other, so we have never argued with each other and we will never argue.

✓ We almost always agree with each other, so we have never argued with each other and we will never argue.

The phrase 'We are almost always we always agree' is redundant and incorrect. 'Almost always agree' is the correct adverb placement and structure.