聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng chưa chính xác. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy chú ý đến việc sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai. Ví dụ, "tracks" có thể là lỗi đánh máy hoặc dùng sai từ, nên dùng "thoughts" hoặc "experiences". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ có liên kết.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after busy days. I can share my thoughts and feelings with them, and they often give me good advice. Also, chatting keeps me connected with friends who are studying abroad.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp hoặc không chính xác. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không rõ nghĩa như "the remote" và nên nói rõ ràng hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

示例: We usually chat about many things in our lives, such as celebrities, current events, and sometimes our homework. For example, we discuss how to solve difficult problems in our assignments.

建议: Câu trả lời có sự mâu thuẫn khi bạn nói thích nói chuyện với một người nhưng lại thích nhóm. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh mâu thuẫn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc. Hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chính xác.

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because I have many close friends. In our group of six, I can share my feelings and thoughts with all of them, and I receive advice from different perspectives, which is very helpful.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "Is funnier". Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý phát âm, ngữ pháp.

示例: It depends on who I am talking to. With my best friend, I prefer face-to-face communication because we can laugh and watch things together, which is more enjoyable than just sending messages. However, with strangers, I prefer social media because I feel a bit shy.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ chính xác hơn. Hãy trình bày ý tưởng rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn bằng cách sử dụng liên từ và cấu trúc câu phù hợp.

示例: Yes, we often argue when working on projects or homework to make the best decisions. I think arguing is important because it helps us strengthen our relationships and understand ourselves better.

× Yes, I really enjoyed chatting with my friends because it's helped me to relax and unwind after the after busy days and I can share my thoughts and feelings and also my tracks with them so that they will give me some, uh, good advice and also chatting help me to stay connected with my friends who are study abroad.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me to relax and unwind after busy days and I can share my thoughts and feelings and also my thoughts with them so that they will give me some good advice and also chatting helps me to stay connected with my friends who are studying abroad.

The original sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'enjoyed' and 'it's helped' when the context is about a habitual action, so present tense 'enjoy' and 'helps' should be used. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'chatting'. 'Who are study abroad' should be 'who are studying abroad' to use the correct present participle form.

× Yes, I really enjoyed chatting with my friends because it's helped me to relax and unwind after the after busy days and I can share my thoughts and feelings and also my tracks with them so that they will give me some, uh, good advice and also chatting help me to stay connected with my friends who are study abroad.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me to relax and unwind after busy days and I can share my thoughts and feelings and also my tracks with them so that they will give me some good advice and also chatting helps me to stay connected with my friends who are studying abroad.

The phrase 'after the after busy days' is incorrect; it should be 'after busy days' without the repeated 'after the'. This corrects the prepositional phrase to make sense.

× Yes, I really enjoyed chatting with my friends because it's helped me to relax and unwind after the after busy days and I can share my thoughts and feelings and also my tracks with them so that they will give me some, uh, good advice and also chatting help me to stay connected with my friends who are study abroad.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me to relax and unwind after busy days and I can share my thoughts and feelings and also my tracks with them so that they will give me some good advice and also chatting helps me to stay connected with my friends who are studying abroad.

The phrase 'who are study abroad' is incorrect; it should be 'who are studying abroad' using the present participle form to indicate ongoing action.

× We chat about everything in our life, like, uh, we're chatting about the celebrities, about the criticisms on, about the remote and also we chat about our homework too, like how to solve this map problems, how to solve this, umm.

✓ We chat about everything in our lives, like, uh, we're chatting about celebrities, about criticisms, about the remote, and also we chat about our homework too, like how to solve these map problems, how to solve this, umm.

The phrase 'in our life' should be 'in our lives' to match plural 'we'. Also, 'the celebrities' and 'the criticisms on' are incorrect; 'celebrities' and 'criticisms' without 'the' or 'on' are appropriate here. 'This map problems' should be 'these map problems' to agree in number.

× We chat about everything in our life, like, uh, we're chatting about the celebrities, about the criticisms on, about the remote and also we chat about our homework too, like how to solve this map problems, how to solve this, umm.

✓ We chat about everything in our lives, like, uh, we're chatting about celebrities, about criticisms, about the remote, and also we chat about our homework too, like how to solve these map problems, how to solve this, umm.

The phrase 'this map problems' mixes singular 'this' with plural 'problems'; it should be 'these map problems' to correctly match plural noun with plural demonstrative.

× Yes, a lot we argue a lot like in our project or in our homework, like we argue together to make the best decisions. And I think that argue is something is important, like is help them to like more strengthen, uh yeah. And know more about, umm, ourself.

✓ Yes, we argue a lot, like in our project or in our homework. We argue together to make the best decisions. And I think that arguing is something important, like it helps us to become stronger, uh yeah, and know more about ourselves.

The verb 'argue' needs to be in gerund form 'arguing' when used as a noun. 'Is help' should be 'it helps' to agree with singular subject. 'More strengthen' is incorrect; it should be 'become stronger'. 'Ourself' should be 'ourselves' as the correct reflexive pronoun for plural subject.

× Yes, a lot we argue a lot like in our project or in our homework, like we argue together to make the best decisions. And I think that argue is something is important, like is help them to like more strengthen, uh yeah. And know more about, umm, ourself.

✓ Yes, we argue a lot, like in our project or in our homework. We argue together to make the best decisions. And I think that arguing is something important, like it helps us to become stronger, uh yeah, and know more about ourselves.

The reflexive pronoun 'ourself' is incorrect; the correct form for plural is 'ourselves'.

× Is based on who I'm talk to. Like with my best friend, I prefer to communicate, uh, face to face because, uh, like we can laugh together and we can like, uh, watch something together Is funnier than, umm, just send it in social. But with stranger, I prefer social because a little, a little bit shy.

✓ It depends on who I'm talking to. Like with my best friend, I prefer to communicate face to face because we can laugh together and watch something together. It is more fun than just sending messages on social media. But with strangers, I prefer social media because I am a little bit shy.

The sentence lacks subject 'It' at the start. 'I'm talk to' should be 'I'm talking to' for correct verb form. 'Is funnier' should be 'It is more fun' for clarity. 'Just send it in social' is unclear; corrected to 'just sending messages on social media'. 'With stranger' should be 'with strangers' to match plural.