聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“I am enjoy with this UMM”应为“I enjoy chatting”，并且表达不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，同时避免重复和不必要的填充词。

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel relaxed and happy. We often talk about interesting topics or share funny stories.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“which is made our have a sense of achievement”应改为“which gives us a sense of achievement”。建议使用连贯的句子结构，明确表达原因和结果，并注意主谓一致。

示例: I usually chat with my friends about interesting or gossip topics because it helps me relax. Sometimes we also discuss popular computer games, which give us a sense of achievement when we win and help release stress.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，如“It’s make me feel”应为“It makes me feel”，以及“playing”应与前文时态一致。表达不够清晰，“It's a heavy time”不符合语境。建议使用正确的时态和更准确的表达。

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because I enjoy the lively atmosphere. It makes me feel happy and relaxed. For example, we often sing together or play mobile phone games.

建议: 句子结构不完整且语法错误较多，如“it's we can see”应为“because we can see”，以及“made our more meaningful”表达不清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确的连接词和表达方式。

示例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because we can see each other's emotions more clearly and use body language, which makes communication more meaningful.

建议: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不完整，如“I think which is very harmful”应为“I think it is very harmful”，且句子断裂。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，避免重复和填充词。

示例: Actually, I don't like arguing with my friends because I think it is very harmful to relationships, not only friendships but also family. I prefer to keep peace.

× I am enjoy with this UMM which help me feel relaxed and happy.

✓ I enjoy this UMM which helps me feel relaxed and happy.

动词enjoy后面不需要用进行时态，应该用一般现在时。动词help第三人称单数形式需要加-s。

× We often talk about interesting topic or share funny gossipy UMM.

✓ We often talk about interesting topics or share funny gossipy UMMs.

topic和UMM应使用复数形式，因为前面有不定数量的描述。

× Sometimes we chatting with some.

✓ Sometimes we chat with some.

动词chat应使用一般现在时，不能用进行时形式。

× I usually chat with my friend about some interesting or gossipy topic because it help me relax and chat up.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about some interesting or gossipy topics because they help me relax and chat up.

friend和topic应使用复数形式，help动词应与复数主语they一致。

× Sometimes we also talk about some popular computer game in Chinese which is made our have a sense of achievement when we winning the game.

✓ Sometimes we also talk about some popular computer games in Chinese which make us have a sense of achievement when we win the game.

game应使用复数形式，make动词应与复数主语games一致，have前应使用宾格代词us，win应使用一般现在时。

× And release the pressure.

✓ And release the pressure.

该句缺少主语，应改为"And it releases the pressure."或与前句合并。

× It's make me feel happy and relaxed.

✓ It makes me feel happy and relaxed.

第三人称单数动词make应加-s。

× For example, we often sing together or playing mobile phone games.

✓ For example, we often sing together or play mobile phone games.

动词play应与sing保持一致，使用一般现在时原形。

× It's a heavy time.

✓ It's a hard time.

heavy用来形容时间不合适，应该用hard表示困难的时间。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it's we can see each other emotion more clearly and we can do some funny body language made our more meaningful.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because we can see each other's emotions more clearly and we can use some funny body language to make our communication more meaningful.

去掉多余的it，each other后应加所有格，emotion应为复数，made应改为make，补充主语communication使句子完整。

× Actually I don't like arguing with my friend because I think which is very harmful to relationship.

✓ Actually I don't like arguing with my friends because I think it is very harmful to relationships.

which指代不明确，应使用it；friend应为复数；relationship应为复数形式。

× Not only friendship but also umm but also family member.

✓ Not only friendship but also family members.

句子结构混乱，去掉多余的but also，family member应为复数。

× I prefer peaceful.

✓ I prefer peace.

prefer后应接名词，peace比peaceful更合适。