聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: In English (Bhutan), try to avoid repeating words and use correct verb forms. Also, keep your answer clear and concise by limiting filler words like 'uh'. For example, say 'I like chatting with my friends because it is fun and helps us understand and learn from each other.'

示例: I like chatting with my friends because it is fun and helps us understand and learn from each other.

建议: In English (Bhutan), make sure to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Instead of repeating 'life experience', you can say 'We usually talk about our daily lives and share experiences.'

示例: We usually talk about our daily lives and share experiences.

建议: In English (Bhutan), try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas. For example, 'I prefer chatting with a group if they are close friends; however, if not, I prefer chatting with one friend because it is more convenient.'

示例: I prefer chatting with a group if they are close friends; however, if not, I prefer chatting with one friend because it is more convenient.

建议: In English (Bhutan), complete your sentences and avoid filler words. Use linking words to compare options. For example, 'I like both because face-to-face communication allows us to see emotions, while social media is convenient for quick messages.'

示例: I like both because face-to-face communication allows us to see emotions, while social media is convenient for quick messages.

建议: In English (Bhutan), use correct vocabulary and complete your thoughts. Instead of 'agree', use 'argue' and explain clearly. For example, 'Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when we have different opinions, but it depends on the situation.'

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when we have different opinions, but it depends on the situation.

× Yes, I like to chatting with my friends because uh chatting with friends is fun and it also it also we can know each other more and we can also learn each other. That's why I like chatting with friends.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because chatting with friends is fun and also we can get to know each other more and we can also learn from each other. That's why I like chatting with friends.

The phrase 'like to chatting' is incorrect because after 'like' we use either the infinitive form 'to chat' or the gerund form 'chatting'. Here, 'like chatting' is correct. Also, 'learn each other' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'learn from each other'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Usually chat about with friends so we can talk about our life experience and also share our day-to-day, uh, life experience.

✓ Usually, I chat with friends about our life experiences and also share our day-to-day experiences.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has awkward word order. Adding 'I' as the subject and rearranging the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, 'life experience' should be plural 'life experiences' to match the context.

× Usually chat about with friends so we can talk about our life experience and also share our day-to-day, uh, life experience.

✓ Usually, I chat with friends about our life experiences and also share our day-to-day experiences.

The phrase 'life experience' should be plural 'life experiences' because it refers to multiple experiences. Using the plural form is appropriate when talking about various experiences.

× If the other person, other people are very friendly and very close with me, I, I prefer, I prefer group of people.

✓ If the other people are very friendly and very close to me, I prefer a group of people.

The phrase 'group of people' needs an article 'a' before it. Also, 'other person, other people' is confusing; 'other people' is sufficient. 'Close with me' should be 'close to me' for correct preposition usage.

× If the other person, other people are very friendly and very close with me, I, I prefer, I prefer group of people.

✓ If the other people are very friendly and very close to me, I prefer a group of people.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect after 'close'; the correct preposition is 'to'. Also, the sentence is simplified for clarity.

× And if they're not uh, I want, I want the before 1 friend because it's very convenient to.

✓ And if they're not, I want to have just one friend because it's very convenient.

The phrase 'the before 1 friend' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'just one friend'. Also, 'want the before' is not proper English structure. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× For me, I can choose both, uh, because the communicate face to face, it's more we can see other expressions, emotions and also we can share whatever we have in our mind and for while in social media we can.

✓ For me, I can choose both because communicating face to face allows us to see expressions and emotions, and we can share whatever is on our minds. On social media, we can also communicate, but differently.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. 'The communicate face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'communicating face to face'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I agree with friends because sometimes it the things doesn't doesn't work what we think.

✓ Yes, I argue with friends because sometimes things don't work out the way we think.

The student said 'agree' instead of 'argue', which changes the meaning. Also, 'doesn't doesn't' is a repetition error. 'It the things' is incorrect; it should be 'things'. The sentence is corrected to reflect the intended meaning and proper grammar.

× So it depends on the situation if the situation is where worse, so if you have to.

✓ So it depends on the situation. If the situation is worse, then you have to adapt.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Where worse' is incorrect; it should be 'worse'. The sentence is completed and clarified for better understanding.