聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần tránh lặp từ và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel connected to others and share my feelings openly.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm từ vựng, tránh lỗi sai như 'Israel' thay vì 'It is'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

示例: As a high school student, I usually talk about our teachers, upcoming exams, and how we performed in recent tests.

建议: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng bạn nên dùng từ chính xác hơn như 'prefer' thay vì 'refer to'. Ngoài ra, câu nên ngắn gọn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I feel more comfortable and we can share our secrets easily.

建议: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ như 'see their expressions' thay vì 'see it really expression'. Câu trả lời nên mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see their facial expressions, which helps me feel more connected than through social media.

建议: Câu trả lời có ý tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'arguments' thay vì 'argument', và cấu trúc câu nên rõ ràng hơn. Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc.

示例: I believe arguments are inevitable in relationships. I have had some disagreements with friends over sensitive topics, but we never broke up and learned to avoid those subjects in the future.

× I really love chatting with my friends because when I when I talk with them I have a feeling is to be connected and I really like to be connected with the society and let them know my feelings.

✓ I really love chatting with my friends because when I talk with them I have a feeling of being connected and I really like to be connected with society and let them know my feelings.

The phrase 'a feeling is to be connected' is incorrect. It should be 'a feeling of being connected' to correctly use the present participle form to express the ongoing state or feeling. Also, 'the society' should be 'society' as it is an uncountable noun here.

× Currently I'm a high school student, so my daily talks is about the teachers, the examinations and how we've done with it.

✓ Currently I'm a high school student, so my daily talks are about the teachers, the examinations and how we've done with them.

The subject 'daily talks' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer correctly to the plural 'examinations'.

× Israel is dreadful to be a high school student.

✓ It is dreadful to be a high school student in Israel.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning by properly structuring the sentence and placing 'dreadful' correctly as an adjective describing the experience.

× I only refer to chat with only one friend because I feel comfortable when I'm alone and not surrounded by crowded people and so we can talk and share about our secret.

✓ I only prefer to chat with one friend because I feel comfortable when I'm alone and not surrounded by a crowd, so we can talk and share our secrets.

'Refer to chat' is incorrect; 'prefer to chat' is the correct modal verb usage here. 'Crowded people' should be 'a crowd' to correctly describe a group of people. Also, 'share about our secret' should be 'share our secrets' for correct verb and plural noun usage.

× I would prefer to communicate face to face because I could see it really expression and I only feel connected when we are standing in front of each other, not by the social media.

✓ I would prefer to communicate face to face because I can really see expressions and I only feel connected when we are standing in front of each other, not through social media.

'See it really expression' is incorrect; it should be 'see expressions' to correctly use the plural noun. 'By the social media' should be 'through social media' as the correct preposition for communication medium.

× I think that why in a relationship we cannot avoid argument and I used to have some argument with my friends when we talk about sensitive problems.

✓ I think that in a relationship we cannot avoid arguments and I used to have some arguments with my friends when we talked about sensitive problems.

'Cannot avoid argument' should be 'cannot avoid arguments' to use the plural noun. 'Used to have' is correct for past habitual action, but 'talk' should be in past tense 'talked' to maintain tense consistency.

× However, we didn't split up and we understand each other more and avoid to talk about that problems in the future.

✓ However, we didn't split up and we understand each other more and avoid talking about those problems in the future.

'Avoid to talk' is incorrect; it should be 'avoid talking' using the gerund form after 'avoid'. 'That problems' should be 'those problems' to correctly use the demonstrative adjective for plural nouns.