聊天— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like chatting with friends?
考生
Of course, I do like chatting with my friends, especially the ones who actually are obsessed with making themselves a better person and focusing on themselves because we can just be supporting each other for the better ourselves.
考官
What do you usually chat about with friends?
考生
Nowadays, I have been chatting with my friends about universities and everything that I have to do to apply to them and also the things that my counselor has been saying to me and every hard thing that I've been through and about my emotions.
考官
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
考生
It actually depends on my mood, but generally I will be speaking with only one of my friends. If I wanna better communication or if something is not going well and some of us need a long time then I will be doing it in individually but other than that probably group of people.
考官
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
考生
It depends on the person bought. I generally like to communicate face to face because if someone that I'm talking to is on face to face, they will just show their real selves. So it will be much better and I will see their emotions and everything and I just love to hear other people's voices.
考官
Do you argue with friends?
考生
In the past, yes I have had those kind of interactions, but nowadays I don't have that kind of friends so I don't. And I don't choose to argue with them. I just choose communication over arguing because I think it just makes our moods worse and I really can't handle that.
评估
总分
语法
× we can just be supporting each other for the better ourselves
✓ we can just be supporting each other for the better of ourselves
The phrase 'for the better ourselves' is incorrect because 'ourselves' needs a preposition to link it properly. The correct phrase is 'for the better of ourselves' to indicate improvement concerning ourselves.
× If I wanna better communication or if something is not going well and some of us need a long time then I will be doing it in individually but other than that probably group of people
✓ If I want better communication or if something is not going well and some of us need a long time then I will be doing it individually but other than that probably a group of people
The phrase 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want' in formal speech. Also, 'in individually' is incorrect; 'individually' alone is sufficient. Additionally, 'group of people' needs an article 'a' before it.
× It depends on the person bought
✓ It depends on the person though
The word 'bought' is a wrong word choice here; the correct word is 'though' to indicate contrast or condition.
× if someone that I'm talking to is on face to face
✓ if someone that I'm talking to is face to face
The phrase 'on face to face' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'face to face' without the preposition 'on'.
× I don't have that kind of friends so I don't
✓ I don't have that kind of friend so I don't
The phrase 'that kind of friends' is incorrect because 'kind' is singular and should be followed by a singular noun 'friend'.
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