聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e grammar bhalo korte hobe, jemon 'I often chatting' er bodole 'I often chat' bola uchit. Sentence gulo ke short r clear rakhun, ar redundancy koman. For example, 'I love to do chatting with my friends' er bodole 'I enjoy chatting with my friends' bolte paren.

示例: Yes, I often chat with my friends in my free time. I find chatting more comfortable than talking face-to-face. It is very convenient for me, so I enjoy chatting with them.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu word repetition ache, jemon 'viral viral'. Eta avoid korun. Ar sentence structure aro clear r logical korte linking words use korun. Specific details dite paren jemon kon celebrity ba kon trend niye kotha hoy.

示例: I usually chat with my friends about various topics, especially current trends on social media. For example, we discuss viral activities of celebrities and the latest fashion trends.

建议: Grammar r spelling e onek bhul ache, jemon 'depend' er bodole 'depends', 'rememory' er bodole 'remember'. Sentence gulo ke short r clear korun. Linking words use korun jate answer logical hoy.

示例: It depends on the situation and my mood. When we want to remember our childhood, I prefer chatting in a group. But if I feel low, I chat with only one close friend.

建议: Apnar answer incomplete r grammar bhul ache. 'can't able to' er bodole 'can't' or 'am not able to' use korun. Sentence complete korun. Linking words use kore answer ke smooth korun.

示例: At present, I prefer to communicate via social media because my hectic schedule does not allow me to meet people face-to-face. Therefore, social media gives me the chance to stay connected with my friends.

建议: Answer incomplete r onek repetition ache. 'It depends' bar bar bola avoid korun. Sentence gulo ke complete r clear korun. Specific example dite paren kobe argument hoy.

示例: It depends on the situation and the topic of conversation. If I have a strong opinion on some issues, sometimes arguments happen between me and my friends. However, we usually resolve them quickly.

× Yes, I often chatting with my friends in my pastime.

✓ Yes, I often chat with my friends in my pastime.

The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used after 'often'. After adverbs of frequency like 'often', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. So, 'chat' is correct here.

× I feel very comfortable to contact with people by chatting, not talking.

✓ I feel very comfortable contacting people by chatting, not talking.

The phrase 'comfortable to contact with' is incorrect. The correct form is 'comfortable contacting' without 'to' and 'with'. Also, 'contact with people' should be 'contacting people'.

× So it's very convenient for me and I love to do chatting with my friends.

✓ So it's very convenient for me and I love chatting with my friends.

The phrase 'love to do chatting' is incorrect. After 'love', the verb can be followed by the '-ing' form directly, so 'love chatting' is correct.

× I chat with my friends with different topics such as present trends going on social media, for example, the viral viral activities of celebrities, the recent trend of our wear drops.

✓ I chat with my friends about different topics such as current trends on social media, for example, the viral activities of celebrities and the recent trend of our wear drops.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used after 'chat'. The correct preposition is 'about'. Also, 'present trends going on social media' is better expressed as 'current trends on social media'. Repetition of 'viral' is a mistake.

× It depends. It depend on situation.

✓ It depends. It depends on the situation.

The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'on situation' needs the definite article 'the'.

× In depend on my mood when we try to rememory our childhood times so then we chat together in a group but when it's I feel very low then I knock my close one and then I chat only.

✓ It depends on my mood. When we try to remember our childhood times, we chat together in a group, but when I feel very low, I contact my close ones and chat only with them.

'In depend' is incorrect; it should be 'It depends'. 'Rememory' is not a word; 'remember' is correct. 'Knock my close one' is incorrect; 'contact my close ones' or 'reach out to my close ones' is better. Also, sentence structure and punctuation are improved for clarity.

× Well at present I prefer to communicate via social media because due to my long hectic schedule I can't able to communicate physically.

✓ Well, at present I prefer to communicate via social media because due to my long hectic schedule, I am not able to communicate physically.

'Can't able to' is incorrect; 'am not able to' is correct. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× So social media give me chance to communicate with with my.

✓ So social media gives me a chance to communicate with my friends.

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'social media'. 'Chance' needs the article 'a'. The sentence is incomplete and 'with with my' is incorrect; it should be 'with my friends'.

× It depends. It depends on situation, it depends on on conversation, it depends on the background.

✓ It depends. It depends on the situation, on the conversation, and on the background.

'On situation' needs the article 'the'. Repetition of 'on' is corrected. Also, conjunction 'and' is added for proper listing.

× Because when I am logical in some issues then yes, in a argument occurs between me and with my friends.

✓ Because when I am logical in some issues, an argument occurs between me and my friends.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'In a argument' should be 'an argument'. 'Between me and with my friends' is incorrect; 'between me and my friends' is correct. Comma added after introductory clause.