聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は自然ですが、"even I'm umm, busy"の部分は文法的に不自然です。より正確な表現に直し、冗長な部分を減らすと良いでしょう。例えば、"even when I am busy"のようにすると自然です。

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to stay connected with them online anytime, which is very convenient. It also helps us strengthen our relationship by sharing daily experiences, even when I am busy.

建议: 回答は内容が具体的で良いですが、"share our lifestyle"は少し曖昧です。また、"which help us stay close"は主語と動詞の一致が間違っています。文法の正確さに注意しましょう。

示例: I usually chat with my friends about what I see during the day and the hobbies I enjoy. This helps us share our daily lives and understand each other better. Also, chatting like this is very easy and comfortable, which helps us stay close even when we are busy.

建议: 回答が途中で途切れており、文法的な誤りもあります。文を完結させ、"what I saying"は"what I am saying"に直しましょう。また、理由をもう少し具体的に述べると良いです。

示例: I'd say I prefer chatting with only one friend because it's easier to communicate clearly and understand each other without confusion.

建议: "since we cannot see our faces"の表現が不自然です。"since we cannot see each other's faces"や"because we don't see each other face-to-face"の方が自然です。理由をもう少し詳しく説明すると良いでしょう。

示例: I prefer to communicate via social media because I find it easier to express my feelings, and since we don't see each other's faces, it feels less overwhelming.

建议: 文法的に多くの誤りがあります。"When I chatting"は"When I chat"、"we had argument between us"は"we have arguments"、"they like misunderstanding"は"there are misunderstandings"に直しましょう。また、文が途中で終わっているので、最後まで完結させる必要があります。

示例: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes because when we chat online, misunderstandings can happen since we cannot see each other's faces. It's important to communicate clearly to avoid these issues.

× It also helps us strengthen our relationship by sharing daily experience even I'm umm, busy.

✓ It also helps us strengthen our relationship by sharing daily experiences even when I'm umm, busy.

The phrase 'sharing daily experience' should use the plural form 'experiences' to match the context of multiple daily events. Also, 'even I'm umm, busy' is incorrect; it should be 'even when I'm umm, busy' to properly connect the clauses.

× It's a great way for me to share our lifestyle and understand each other better.

✓ It's a great way for me to share my lifestyle and understand each other better.

The pronoun 'our' is inconsistent with 'me' in the sentence. Since the speaker is referring to their own lifestyle, 'my' is the correct pronoun to use here.

× Also, chatting like this is very easy and comfortable which help us stay close even when we are busy.

✓ Also, chatting like this is very easy and comfortable, which helps us stay close even when we are busy.

A comma is needed before 'which' to separate the clauses. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'chatting like this'.

× I'd say I prefer chatting with only one friend because I find it really easy to communicate with one person and. MMM, it is easy to understand what I saying.

✓ I'd say I prefer chatting with only one friend because I find it really easy to communicate with one person. MMM, it is easy to understand what I am saying.

The original sentence is incomplete and has a fragment after 'and.' It should be split into two sentences. Also, 'what I saying' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am'.

× Yeah, absolutely. When I chatting with my friends we had argument between us because since we cannot see our faces, so they like misunderstanding.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. When I am chatting with my friends, we have arguments between us because, since we cannot see our faces, there is often misunderstanding.

'When I chatting' should be 'When I am chatting' to use the correct present continuous tense. 'We had argument' should be 'we have arguments' to match the present tense context. Also, 'they like misunderstanding' is incorrect; it should be 'there is often misunderstanding.'

× It is quite important thing to.

✓ It is quite an important thing too.

The sentence is incomplete and missing the article 'an' before 'important thing.' Also, 'to' should be 'too' to mean 'also.'