聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้องมากขึ้น และควรหลีกเลี่ยงความซ้ำซ้อน เช่น คำว่า 'life minded hobbies' ควรแก้เป็น 'shared hobbies' และ 'getting them' ควรชัดเจนกว่านี้ นอกจากนี้ ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหล เช่น 'because' หรือ 'which helps me'.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it gives me a chance to share experiences about our shared hobbies, such as playing games or watching movies. Moreover, talking with them helps me relieve stress by explaining my problems and receiving their advice.

建议: คำตอบควรชัดเจนและใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'chat experience' ควรแก้เป็น 'share experiences' และ 'global talk' ควรระบุให้ชัดเจนว่าเป็นเรื่องอะไร นอกจากนี้ ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยค เช่น 'and' หรือ 'also'.

示例: Normally, we usually chat at night on a call, mostly about online games or our daily activities. We like to share experiences so that we can relax and unwind after a stressful day. We also often discuss global news and current events.

建议: คำตอบดีแล้ว แต่ควรใช้ tense ให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'allowed' ควรเป็น 'allows' และเพิ่ม linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น 'because' และ 'but'.

示例: In my opinion, I prefer chatting with a small group of people rather than just one friend because it allows us to share different experiences and opinions more effectively. However, having too many people can make the conversation noisy and difficult to follow.

建议: คำตอบดีและชัดเจน แต่ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหลมากขึ้น เช่น 'however' แทน 'on the other hand' และเพิ่มคำอธิบายเล็กน้อยเพื่อความสมบูรณ์.

示例: From my experience, it depends on the situation. If I want to express my feelings or discuss an important topic, I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows a better emotional connection. However, I usually prefer social media for everyday communication since it is more convenient.

建议: คำตอบควรใช้คำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I have occurred with my friends' ควรแก้เป็น 'I have argued with my friends'. นอกจากนี้ ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยค เช่น 'for example' และ 'but'.

示例: Yes, I have argued with my friends before. For example, during a group project, we sometimes had conflicts because we had different opinions about the topic we wanted to present. But we managed to resolve our differences and became closer.

× I really enjoy chatting with my friends as it gives me a chance to share experience about our life minded hobbies such as playing games or watching movies.

✓ I really enjoy chatting with my friends as it gives me a chance to share experiences about our life-minded hobbies such as playing games or watching movies.

The word 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' because it refers to multiple instances or types of experiences related to hobbies. Using the plural form is appropriate when talking about various experiences.

× Sometimes talking with them help me relive stress by explaining my problems and getting them.

✓ Sometimes talking with them helps me relieve stress by explaining my problems and getting support.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'talking'. Also, 'relive' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'relieve' meaning to reduce stress. 'Getting them' is unclear; 'getting support' or 'getting help' is more appropriate.

× Normally, we usually chat at night on this call, mostly about online games or our daily activities.

✓ Normally, we usually chat at night on this call, mostly about online games or our daily activities.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no preposition errors detected.

× We like to chat experience so we could relax and unwind after a stressful day.

✓ We like to chat about experiences so we can relax and unwind after a stressful day.

The phrase 'chat experience' is incorrect; it should be 'chat about experiences' to indicate the topic of conversation. Also, 'could' is changed to 'can' to match the present habitual action.

× Many times we also talk about global talk.

✓ Many times we also talk about global topics.

The phrase 'global talk' is awkward and unclear. 'Global topics' is more appropriate to express discussions about worldwide issues.

× To my mind, I prefer chatting with a small group of people rather than just one friend, as it allowed us to share different experiences and opinions more effectively.

✓ To my mind, I prefer chatting with a small group of people rather than just one friend, as it allows us to share different experiences and opinions more effectively.

The verb 'allowed' is past tense but the sentence is about a general preference, so present tense 'allows' is correct.

× From my experience, it depends on the situation. If I want to express my feelings or discuss an important topic, I prefer to communicate face to face as it allows better emotional connection.

✓ From my experience, it depends on the situation. If I want to express my feelings or discuss an important topic, I prefer to communicate face-to-face as it allows better emotional connection.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective or adverb.

× On the other hand, I usually prefer social media since it is more convenient.

✓ On the other hand, I usually prefer social media since it is more convenient.

This sentence is correct; no singular/plural issues detected.

× Yes, I have occurred with my friends before.

✓ Yes, I have had conflicts with my friends before.

The verb 'occurred' is incorrectly used here. The correct expression is 'have had conflicts' or 'have argued' to indicate disagreements with friends.