聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu rõ ràng hơn để người nghe dễ hiểu.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because I am an outgoing person. Talking with them helps me feel connected and less lonely.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và dùng từ vựng phù hợp. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

示例: My friends and I usually chat about our lessons, hobbies, other classmates, and the latest news on social media.

建议: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác. Bạn nên luyện tập cách dùng thì và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I prefer chatting with a group because it allows me to hear different opinions, which makes the conversation more interesting and meaningful.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là cách chia động từ và cách dùng từ. Hãy luyện tập cách diễn đạt tự nhiên và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because we can see each other's eyes, get immediate feedback, and understand body language, which makes the conversation more real and personal.

建议: Câu trả lời cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

示例: Of course, friends sometimes have small conflicts because of different opinions or hobbies. However, we usually talk clearly to resolve them and become closer.

× I when I talk with other I find myself considering experience having a social connection.

✓ When I talk with others, I find myself considering the experience of having a social connection.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage: 'other' should be 'others' to refer to other people. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and missing articles. Correcting pronouns and adding articles improves clarity.

× I and my friends have a lot of topic because we are still a student so we usually talk about the lesson on class, the other guys, our hobby or the hot news on social media and even our course.

✓ My friends and I have a lot of topics because we are still students, so we usually talk about the lessons in class, other people, our hobbies, hot news on social media, and even our courses.

The sentence has singular/plural mismatches: 'a lot of topic' should be 'a lot of topics'; 'a student' should be 'students'; 'lesson on class' should be 'lessons in class'; 'hobby' should be 'hobbies'; 'the other guys' is better as 'other people'. Correcting these improves grammatical agreement and clarity.

× I prefer chatting with a group of people because it's allowed me to hear different opinions.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to hear different opinions.

The phrase 'it's allowed me' incorrectly uses the past participle 'allowed' with 'it is'. The correct form is 'it allows' to express present tense ability or permission.

× when I talk with my three close friends and I can hear, uh, three perspective in one manner and I can understand more make the conversation, uh, meaningful and interesting more than.

✓ When I talk with my three close friends, I can hear three perspectives at once, and I can understand more, making the conversation more meaningful and interesting.

'Three perspective' should be 'three perspectives' to match plural form. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I really love communicate face to face because when I talk to other in person, we can see eye to eyes each other.

✓ I really love communicating face to face because when I talk to others in person, we can see eye to eye with each other.

'Communicate' should be in gerund form 'communicating' after 'love'. 'Other' should be plural 'others'. The phrase 'eye to eyes' is incorrect; correct is 'eye to eye'. Also, 'with each other' is needed for clarity.

× We can have immediate feedback and body language like heart, like personal talk and it's make the conversation more, uh, real and our relationship is funny.

✓ We can have immediate feedback and body language like heart, like personal talk, and it makes the conversation more real, and our relationship is fun.

'It's make' should be 'it makes' for subject-verb agreement. 'Funny' is incorrect in this context; 'fun' is appropriate to describe a positive relationship. Sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× when we make friends each other, we can't avoid small conflict, it is different in opinion or personal hobby, and we usually have an argument of it.

✓ When we make friends with each other, we can't avoid small conflicts; they are differences in opinion or personal hobbies, and we usually have arguments about them.

'Make friends each other' should be 'make friends with each other'. 'Small conflict' should be plural 'small conflicts'. 'Different in opinion' should be 'differences in opinion'. 'Argument of it' should be 'arguments about them'. These prepositional and plural corrections improve grammatical accuracy.

× But finally we stand down talking clearly and to be more closely.

✓ But finally, we calm down, talk clearly, and become closer.

'Stand down' is incorrect here; 'calm down' fits better. 'Talking' should be 'talk' to match parallel structure. 'To be more closely' is incorrect; 'become closer' is correct. Past tense and verb form corrections improve sentence clarity and correctness.