聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'and uh' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'the most favorite activities of our free time is chatting' to 'one of our favorite free-time activities is chatting'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my best friend Salima. We often talk about food, clothes, and our other friends. Moreover, chatting is one of our favorite free-time activities, and we like to meet up and have long conversations.

建议: Your answer is clear but could be improved by avoiding vague phrases like 'a lot of things' and 'that's it'. Also, use more precise vocabulary and linking words to make your answer more coherent and detailed.

示例: We usually chat about various topics. For example, recently we discussed the agency results and felt disappointed because some of us did not achieve what we expected. Therefore, we talked about what went wrong and how to improve next time, sharing our thoughts in detail.

建议: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to sound more confident. Also, correct phrases like 'just one in one conversation' to 'one-on-one conversation'. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas logically and be more concise.

示例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I am introverted and feel more comfortable in one-on-one conversations. Sometimes, I talk to random people, but not often. This way, I can express myself more freely without feeling overwhelmed.

建议: Try to avoid repetition and redundancy such as 'face and face to face' and 'it makes me awkward'. Use clearer sentence structures and linking words. Also, improve vocabulary by replacing 'talk' with 'communicate' or 'interact'.

示例: I prefer to communicate via social media because I am an introvert. I don't like talking much, and when I have to interact face-to-face, I often feel embarrassed and awkward.

建议: There are several grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like 'We don't share them brain we are' and 'we get connected with each other'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I often argue with my friends because we have different opinions. Sometimes we agree, but other times we disagree, especially during special events or when something is wrong. Therefore, arguments happen occasionally.

× the most favorite activities of our free time is chatting and we like to meet up and have long conversation

✓ the most favorite activities of our free time are chatting and we like to meet up and have long conversations

The subject 'activities' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'conversation' should be plural 'conversations' to match the plural context. In English, subject-verb agreement requires the verb to agree in number with the subject. Here, 'activities' is plural, so use 'are'. Similarly, 'conversations' is plural to indicate multiple instances.

× Recently we talked about agency results and we felt really disappointed because some of us didn't get much we expected

✓ Recently we talked about agency results and we felt really disappointed because some of us didn't get as much as we expected

The phrase 'didn't get much we expected' is incorrect. The correct form is 'didn't get as much as we expected' to express the comparison properly. In English, when comparing quantities, 'as much as' is used to indicate the expected amount.

× I can explain more freely without, uh, feeling overwhelmed with just one in one conversation

✓ I can explain more freely without, uh, feeling overwhelmed with just one-on-one conversation

The phrase 'just one in one conversation' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'just one-on-one conversation' which is a fixed phrase meaning a conversation between two people. Using the correct phrase improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I feel embarrassed and awkward whenever I talk to someone face and face to face and it makes me awkward

✓ I feel embarrassed and awkward whenever I talk to someone face to face and it makes me awkward

The phrase 'face and face to face' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'face to face' meaning in person. Removing the extra 'and face' corrects the preposition usage.

× We don't share them brain we are

✓ We don't share the same brain

The phrase 'share them brain we are' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'share the same brain' meaning we think differently. The pronoun 'them' is incorrect here; 'the same' is the correct adjective phrase to express similarity.

× Sometimes we get connected with each other but sometimes we don't

✓ Sometimes we get along with each other but sometimes we don't

The phrase 'get connected with each other' is awkward. The correct expression is 'get along with each other' meaning to have a good relationship. Using the correct conjunction and phrase improves clarity.