聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法和表达有些不自然，且存在重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意动词形式和词汇搭配。

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends because they understand me well and genuinely celebrate my successes. I like sharing my good news with them.

建议: 回答内容较丰富，但表达不够连贯，且有语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意主谓一致和词汇准确。

示例: We usually talk about our recent school life, such as teachers and upcoming tests, as well as our future plans. For example, we both want to study abroad. We also discuss news topics, including political news that interests us.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够简洁的问题。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的介词和代词，并用连接词增强逻辑性。

示例: I prefer chatting with one friend because in a group, it's hard to focus since people talk about different topics randomly. Talking one-on-one allows deeper conversations and better understanding.

建议: 回答表达较好，但句子较长且缺少适当的停顿。建议分句表达，使用连接词使句子更清晰自然。

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because we can understand each other better by observing facial expressions and gestures. This helps us grasp the true meaning behind words.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议注意动词形式和介词使用，简化句子结构，并明确表达观点。

示例: Yes, I think arguing is unavoidable because people have different opinions. However, I try to avoid frequent arguments with friends, except on important issues like research projects we are working on.

× I like chatting with my friends, but only to my close friends because I think they can understand me deeply and emphasize with me, uh, truly and be really happy about my successful.

✓ I like chatting with my friends, but only with my close friends because I think they can understand me deeply and empathize with me, uh, truly and be really happy about my success.

介词使用错误，'chatting with'后面应接'with'而非'to'，且'emphasize with'应为'empathize with'，'my successful'应为'my success'。建议注意介词搭配和词汇选择。

× I always chat many things, uh, from our recent situations about our schools and the teachers and the upcoming tests to our future plan.

✓ I always chat about many things, uh, from our recent situations about our schools and the teachers and the upcoming tests to our future plans.

名词单复数错误，'plan'应为复数形式'plans'，且'chat many things'应改为'chat about many things'，注意动词搭配和名词复数形式。

× Like we all both want to study abroad in the future.

✓ Like we both want to study abroad in the future.

代词使用错误，'all both'重复且不合适，应只用'both'。建议避免重复使用表示数量的词。

× And we also talk about some news, like political news that we have both interested in.

✓ And we also talk about some news, like political news that we are both interested in.

介词和动词形式错误，'have both interested in'应为'are both interested in'，注意动词时态和搭配。

× if I choose with a group of people it will very hard for me to focus on what they say because they always talk randomly without certain topic.

✓ if I choose a group of people it will be very hard for me to focus on what they say because they always talk randomly without a certain topic.

介词使用错误，'choose with'应为'choose'，且缺少动词'be'，'without certain topic'应为'without a certain topic'。注意介词搭配和冠词使用。

× And so I like to talk with one friend which I can talk deeply with them and we can understand other better.

✓ And so I like to talk with one friend with whom I can talk deeply and we can understand each other better.

代词使用错误，'which'应为'with whom'，'them'应去掉，'other'应为'each other'。建议注意关系代词和反身代词的正确使用。

× I prefer to talk with others in person because I think by talking face to face we can understand each other better by noticing their facial expressions and their gestures so we can better catch the sense of others.

✓ I prefer to talk with others in person because I think by talking face to face we can understand each other better by noticing their facial expressions and their gestures, so we can better catch the feelings of others.

词汇使用不当，'catch the sense of others'表达不准确，改为'catch the feelings of others'更合适。建议注意词汇搭配。

× But I always avoid to argue with my friends with high frequency only on some uh, core problems we will argue like the research we was carrying out.

✓ But I always avoid arguing with my friends frequently; only on some, uh, core problems do we argue, like the research we were carrying out.

情态动词和动词形式错误，'avoid to argue'应为'avoid arguing'，'we was'应为'we were'，句子结构不清晰，需调整。建议注意动词搭配和主谓一致。