聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'be' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, correct small grammar mistakes such as 'face face to some problems' to 'face some problems'. Keep your answer concise and clear, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends because we can share our daily lives and support each other when we face problems. This makes me feel relaxed and connected.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect topics and be specific about what you discuss. For example, mention specific aspects of children's education or work.

示例: We usually chat about our children's education, such as their school progress and activities. Sometimes, we also talk about our work and daily routines, which are easy and common topics.

建议: Good direct answer with reasons. To improve, avoid repeating words like 'I'm' and filler words like 'uh'. Also, correct small mistakes such as 'CLO' to 'close'. Use linking words to make your answer smoother.

示例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am a little shy. When I talk in a group, I feel nervous, so I like to share my daily life with a close friend instead.

建议: Your answer is clear but contains filler words and minor grammar errors like 'social medias' instead of 'social media'. Try to use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas and avoid fillers for better fluency.

示例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face; however, because we are getting busier, chatting via social media is more convenient and helps us stay connected.

建议: Your answer is good and polite. To improve, avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated words like 'I'. Also, try to expand your answer slightly with linking words to show contrast and respect.

示例: I hardly argue with friends because I believe everyone has their own opinions. Even if I don't agree with them, I always respect their views.

× Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends, uh, be because we can share the daily life with each other and, uh, we can seek help when we face face to some problems. Uh, this we, we make me feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends because we can share our daily lives with each other and seek help when we face some problems. This makes me feel relaxed.

The phrase 'be because' is an incorrect conjunction use; 'because' alone is sufficient. Also, 'face face to some problems' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'face some problems'. The sentence 'this we, we make me feel relaxed' is ungrammatical and should be corrected to 'This makes me feel relaxed' to properly convey the meaning.

× Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends, uh, be because we can share the daily life with each other and, uh, we can seek help when we face face to some problems. Uh, this we, we make me feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends because we can share our daily lives with each other and seek help when we face some problems. This makes me feel relaxed.

The phrase 'the daily life' should be 'our daily lives' to correctly use possessive pronouns and plural form to match 'friends' and the context of multiple lives.

× We usually talk about the uh the daily life of the children's education of our children and sometimes we T also, uh chat about our work. Usually the uh easy topic not.

✓ We usually talk about the daily lives and education of our children, and sometimes we also chat about our work. Usually, the topics are easy.

'The daily life' should be plural 'daily lives' to match multiple people. 'Children's education of our children' is redundant and awkward; it should be 'education of our children'. The phrase 'Usually the uh easy topic not' is ungrammatical and should be corrected to 'Usually, the topics are easy' to form a proper sentence.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I'm I'm a little bit shy. Uh, when I chat with a group of people I feel nervous so I just want to share my daily life with my CLO close friend.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I'm a little bit shy. When I chat with a group of people, I feel nervous, so I just want to share my daily life with my close friend.

The phrase 'my CLO close friend' contains a typo 'CLO' which should be removed. Also, commas are needed after introductory phrases and before conjunctions to improve sentence clarity.

× I prefer to communicate face to face but now because we are busy, busier and busier, uh, chat via social medias is more convenient for us. It can keep us connected uh.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face, but now because we are busier and busier, chatting via social media is more convenient for us. It can keep us connected.

'Chat via social medias' is incorrect; 'chatting via social media' is correct because 'chatting' is the gerund form needed here and 'social media' is an uncountable noun and does not take a plural 's'. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× I hardly argue with friends. I uh, I think every person has their own opinions. Maybe I don't agree with them, but I respect them.

✓ I hardly argue with friends. I think every person has their own opinions. Maybe I don't agree with them, but I respect them.

No modal verb error found in this sentence; the sentence is grammatically correct. The filler 'uh' can be omitted for clarity.