聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน นอกจากนี้ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้ลื่นไหลและมีความสมเหตุสมผลมากขึ้น

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. For personal topics, I prefer talking with close friends because I trust them more. However, with common friends, I usually share funny stories or light-hearted topics.

建议: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อทำให้คำตอบมีความชัดเจนและลื่นไหลมากขึ้น รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน

示例: I usually chat with my close friends to update each other about our lives since we live far apart and only meet once a year. Therefore, we like to keep in touch and share our experiences.

建议: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสมเพื่อให้คำตอบมีความสมเหตุสมผลและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่หลากหลายและเหมาะสมกับบริบท

示例: It depends on the topic. For sensitive or personal matters, I prefer chatting with one close friend. However, for funny stories or general sharing, chatting in a group is more enjoyable.

建议: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง รวมถึงใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดและทำให้คำตอบมีความชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see non-verbal cues like facial expressions and body language, which help me understand what topics my friends want to share more.

建议: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อนและทำให้คำตอบมีความชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

示例: I don't argue with my friends often because I prefer to respect their opinions and avoid conflicts. I usually accept what they say without disagreement.

× Of course I like chatting with friends, but in some topic like the personal one, I prefer talking with my close friends more than common friends.

✓ Of course I like chatting with friends, but in some topics like personal ones, I prefer talking with my close friends more than common friends.

The word 'topic' should be plural 'topics' because it refers to more than one type of topic. Also, 'the personal one' should be 'personal ones' to match the plural form. This improves clarity and grammatical agreement.

× Common friends I would talk about something funny or some stories I think.

✓ With common friends, I would talk about something funny or some stories, I think.

The sentence is missing a preposition 'with' before 'common friends' to clarify the relationship. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; adding commas and prepositions improves clarity.

× Mostly I'm chatting with my close friends about updating our life because we are live far apart from each other and we are met like once a year so we like to updating our life to each others.

✓ Mostly I chat with my close friends about updating our lives because we live far apart from each other and we meet like once a year, so we like to update our lives to each other.

The present continuous 'I'm chatting' is changed to simple present 'I chat' to express habitual action. 'We are live' is incorrect; it should be 'we live'. 'We are met' should be 'we meet'. 'Updating' should be 'update' to match the verb form after 'like to'. 'Life' should be plural 'lives' because it refers to multiple people. 'Each others' should be 'each other'.

× If it is sensitive or personal one, I prefer talking with only one close friends.

✓ If it is a sensitive or personal topic, I prefer talking with only one close friend.

'One close friends' is incorrect because 'one' requires singular noun 'friend'. Also, 'one' should be preceded by 'a sensitive or personal topic' for clarity.

× But if the topic are funny things and the sharing story things, I think the group of people would be nice.

✓ But if the topics are funny things and sharing stories, I think a group of people would be nice.

'Topic are' should be 'topics are' to agree in number. 'Sharing story things' is awkward; 'sharing stories' is better. 'The group of people' should be 'a group of people' to indicate any group.

× For me I prefer to communicate face to face more than social media because when you are face to face you can have the non verbal clue like facial expressions or their body language what topic they are wanted to share more or what topic they are.

✓ For me, I prefer to communicate face to face more than via social media because when you are face to face, you can have non-verbal clues like facial expressions or body language to understand what topics they want to share more or what topics they have.

'More than social media' should be 'more than via social media' to indicate the medium. 'Non verbal clue' should be plural 'non-verbal clues'. The phrase 'what topic they are wanted to share more or what topic they are' is ungrammatical; it is corrected to 'to understand what topics they want to share more or what topics they have' for clarity and grammar.

× I am not argue with my friend that much because I am some kind of people who don't want to interrupt other idea or fight with my friends.

✓ I do not argue with my friends that much because I am the kind of person who doesn't want to interrupt others' ideas or fight with my friends.

'I am not argue' is incorrect; it should be 'I do not argue'. 'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match context. 'Some kind of people' should be 'the kind of person' to refer to oneself. 'Interrupt other idea' should be 'interrupt others' ideas' to show possession and plural.

× I think I can go with anything that my friends just said.

✓ I think I can go along with anything that my friends just said.

'Go with' is less idiomatic here; 'go along with' is better to express agreement. The tense 'just said' is acceptable as past action recently completed.