聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and incorrect adverbs such as 'oftenly'. Use more natural phrasing and keep your answer concise and clear. For example, say 'I often chat with my friends at night after dinner because it helps me relax and share my thoughts.'

示例: Yes, I often chat with my friends at night after dinner because it helps me relax and share my thoughts.

建议: Focus on making your sentences clear and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific. For example, 'I usually chat about my daily life, including any issues I face and funny moments that happen with my family.'

示例: I usually chat about my daily life, including any issues I face and funny moments that happen with my family.

建议: Avoid filler words and incorrect grammar. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example, 'I prefer chatting with a group of people because it is more relaxing and everyone shares funny comments, which makes the conversation enjoyable.'

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it is more relaxing and everyone shares funny comments, which makes the conversation enjoyable.

建议: Your answer is too short and unclear. Provide a clear topic sentence and supporting detail using linking words. For example, 'I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand emotions better and have a more meaningful conversation.'

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand emotions better and have a more meaningful conversation.

建议: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. For example, 'Yes, I sometimes argue with my best friends because they make mistakes or do things that are not good for them.'

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my best friends because they make mistakes or do things that are not good for them.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends and I do oftenly, uh, in the night time after my dinner, uh, because it gives me more relaxation to uh, to talk with my issues or uh, uh.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends and I often do it in the night time after my dinner because it gives me more relaxation to talk about my issues.

The adverb 'oftenly' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'often'. Also, 'I do oftenly' is awkward; the correct placement is 'I often do it'. Additionally, 'talk with my issues' is incorrect; it should be 'talk about my issues'. Removing filler words improves clarity.

× Usually I chat with my friends about my daily life, what's going on and what issue I had and what the family movements.

✓ Usually I chat with my friends about my daily life, what's going on, what issues I have had, and family events.

The word 'issue' should be plural 'issues' to match the context. 'What the family movements' is incorrect; 'family events' or 'family activities' is more appropriate. Also, 'what issue I had' should be 'what issues I have had' to maintain tense consistency.

× I it's funny moments happen with me.

✓ There are funny moments that happen to me.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Using 'There are' introduces the subject properly, and 'funny moments that happen to me' is a correct and clear expression.

× Oftenly I like to chat with group of people because uh it give me more relaxation and everyone comment their funny comments so which is good me for my.

✓ Often, I like to chat with a group of people because it gives me more relaxation and everyone shares their funny comments, which is good for me.

'Oftenly' is incorrect; use 'Often'. 'Chat with group of people' needs an article: 'a group of people'. 'It give' should be 'it gives' for subject-verb agreement. 'Everyone comment their funny comments' is incorrect; 'everyone shares their funny comments' is better. The phrase 'which is good me for my' is incomplete and corrected to 'which is good for me'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because while I communicate with face to face, it's good.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when I communicate face to face, it's better.

The phrase 'communicate with face to face' is incorrect; 'communicate face to face' is the correct form. Also, 'while' is better replaced with 'when' to indicate the time of communication. 'It's good' is vague; 'it's better' is clearer.

× Uh, yes. With my best friends, I argue with them, uh, because sometimes they read some mistake or, uh, they did some job which is not good for them that time I argue with them.

✓ Uh, yes. With my best friends, I argue with them because sometimes they make mistakes or do some things that are not good for them; at those times, I argue with them.

'They read some mistake' is incorrect; it should be 'they make mistakes'. 'They did some job' is awkward; 'do some things' is better. The phrase 'which is not good for them that time I argue with them' is a run-on and unclear; splitting into two clauses improves clarity and grammar.