聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid repetition and filler words like 'uh'. Also, make your sentences more concise and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and ensure your answer is within 5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it allows me to share my views and learn from their experiences. This exchange motivates me and broadens my knowledge, which helps me grow personally and professionally.

建议: Avoid repeating words and unclear phrases like 'interaction power'. Use clearer vocabulary and linking words to organize your ideas logically. Be more specific about the topics you discuss.

示例: I usually chat about various social topics, such as environmental issues and current market trends. If my friend is feeling emotional, I prefer to discuss personal matters to support them better.

建议: Work on sentence structure and grammar to make your answer clearer. Use linking words like 'because' and 'whereas' correctly. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'widened knowledge' and express your ideas more naturally.

示例: Honestly, I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for deeper conversations and better sharing of emotions. In contrast, group chats can be confusing and make it harder to express my feelings fully.

建议: Avoid unclear phrases like 'phase two phase' and focus on clear, natural expressions. Use linking words to compare options and explain your preference clearly and concisely.

示例: In my opinion, face-to-face communication is better because it allows us to express emotions more personally. Social media lacks the physical and emotional connection, making it harder to fully understand others' feelings.

建议: Improve grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words like 'however' and 'if' properly. Be more specific about when and why you argue with friends.

示例: I usually avoid arguing with friends; however, if I believe someone is mistaken about an important social issue that could affect us all, I would discuss it firmly to clarify my point.

× Yes, I'm a person who who is fond of interacting with people and communicating with the people.

✓ Yes, I'm a person who is fond of interacting with people and communicating with the people.

The sentence contains a repeated word 'who who' which is a typographical error and disrupts the sentence structure. Removing the duplicate 'who' corrects the sentence.

× I'd like to share my views and uh, take opinions from the people regarding the different aspect of their life.

✓ I'd like to share my views and uh, take opinions from the people regarding the different aspects of their life.

The word 'aspect' should be plural 'aspects' because it refers to multiple parts of life. Using the plural form matches the context and is grammatically correct.

× It helps me to uh motivate and encourage to prosper in my future and gives a wide variety of knowledge also.

✓ It helps me to uh motivate and encourage me to prosper in my future and gives a wide variety of knowledge also.

The verb 'encourage' requires an object, so 'me' should be added after 'encourage' to complete the meaning.

× Well, usually I like to chat on different topics of the society.

✓ Well, usually I like to chat about different topics of society.

The correct preposition to use with 'chat' when referring to topics is 'about' not 'on'. Also, 'society' does not need the definite article 'the' here.

× It can be related, related to the environment, personal issues.

✓ It can be related to the environment, personal issues.

The word 'related' should be followed by 'to' and the first 'related' is redundant and should be removed for clarity.

× It depends upon the person's interaction power with me.

✓ It depends upon the person's ability to interact with me.

The phrase 'interaction power' is incorrect; 'ability to interact' is the correct expression to convey the intended meaning.

× If they have emotional then I talk with the personal aspects of the life.

✓ If they are emotional then I talk about the personal aspects of life.

'Have emotional' is incorrect; the correct form is 'are emotional'. Also, 'talk with' should be 'talk about' and 'the personal aspects of the life' should be 'the personal aspects of life'.

× Otherwise I talk according to the society and current trends going in the market.

✓ Otherwise I talk about society and current trends going on in the market.

The phrase 'talk according to the society' is incorrect; 'talk about society' is correct. Also, 'going in the market' should be 'going on in the market'.

× Telling honestly if I want to chat whether persons then I would prefer to talk with a one person because if we interact with one particular person then have more widened knowledge and we can share our emotions and feeling.

✓ To be honest, if I want to chat with people, then I would prefer to talk with one person because if we interact with one particular person, then we have more extensive knowledge and can share our emotions and feelings.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'Telling honestly' should be 'To be honest'; 'whether persons' is incorrect, should be 'with people'; 'a one person' should be 'one person'; 'have more widened knowledge' is incorrect, should be 'have more extensive knowledge'; 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings'.

× Whereas talking in a group or a chat is more confusing and I'm not able to express my feelings in such a wider way.

✓ Whereas talking in a group or a chat is more confusing, and I'm not able to express my feelings in such a broad way.

A comma is needed before 'and' to separate independent clauses. Also, 'wider way' is incorrect; 'broad way' or 'wider manner' is better, but 'broad way' fits better here.

× Well, according to why, by my viewpoint, I feel that phase two phase conversations are much, much more convenient as we are able to express our own feelings and emotion in a more personal way as compared to the social media where we don't have the physical emotional attachment of the persons and we can't understand their feelings in a much wider way.

✓ Well, in my viewpoint, I feel that face-to-face conversations are much, much more convenient as we are able to express our own feelings and emotions in a more personal way compared to social media where we don't have the physical emotional attachment to the persons and we can't understand their feelings in a much broader way.

'According to why, by my viewpoint' is incorrect; 'in my viewpoint' is correct. 'Phase two phase' should be 'face-to-face'. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions'. 'As compared to the social media' should be 'compared to social media'. 'Attachment of the persons' should be 'attachment to the persons'. 'Much wider way' should be 'much broader way'.

× Mostly I'm a person who don't prefer arguing with the people, but it depends upon such circumstances where I have to argue on a particular aspect of the society.

✓ Mostly I'm a person who doesn't prefer arguing with people, but it depends upon circumstances where I have to argue on a particular aspect of society.

The subject 'who' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't' not 'don't'. Also, 'the people' and 'the society' should be 'people' and 'society' without 'the'.

× If they I feel another person is getting wrong or falling a wrong path then I would argue on particular topic which would finally affect the society and ultimately me also.

✓ If I feel another person is going wrong or falling on the wrong path, then I would argue on a particular topic which would finally affect society and ultimately me also.

The phrase 'If they I feel' is incorrect; it should be 'If I feel'. 'Getting wrong' is incorrect; 'going wrong' is correct. 'Falling a wrong path' should be 'falling on the wrong path'. 'On particular topic' should be 'on a particular topic'. 'The society' should be 'society'.