聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevabınız doğal ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. "Relax" fiilini doğru kullanmak için "relaxes" şeklinde çekimlemeli ve cümlenizi daha akıcı yapmak için gereksiz tekrarları azaltmalısınız.

示例: Yes, of course. Chatting with friends relaxes my mind and having someone to talk to helps me feel more at ease.

建议: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal karışıklıklar var. "How is my day went" gibi ifadeler yanlış. Ayrıca, cümleniz çok dağınık ve gereksiz tekrarlar içeriyor. Daha net ve doğru cümleler kurmaya çalışın.

示例: I usually chat with my friends about how our day went, what we did, and how we felt. We share our experiences and talk about different topics.

建议: Cümlenizde tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "A crowded people" ifadesi yanlış, "a crowd of people" olmalı. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha akıcı ve doğal yapmak için bağlaçları doğru kullanmalısınız.

示例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in a crowd, it's hard to hear or have a proper conversation with everyone.

建议: Cümlenizde tekrarlar ve anlamsal belirsizlikler var. "Impress myself" ifadesi yanlış kullanılmış. Daha açık ve doğru ifadeler kullanarak düşüncelerinizi net ifade edin.

示例: I am an old-fashioned person who prefers face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and effective than social media.

建议: Cümlenizde gereksiz tekrarlar var ve biraz daha doğal ifade kullanabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, neden argüman yapmadığınızı biraz daha açıklayarak cevabınızı zenginleştirebilirsiniz.

示例: I don't usually argue with my friends or family because I prefer to stay calm and avoid conflicts.

× It makes me relax my mind, and having somebody to talk with makes you more relax, let's say.

✓ It makes me relax my mind, and having somebody to talk with makes you more relaxed, let's say.

The adjective 'relaxed' should be used here instead of the verb 'relax' to describe the state of feeling calm. 'Relax' is a verb, but in this context, an adjective is needed to describe the feeling.

× I'm chatting about my with my friends about umm, how is my day went, how did I do, what did I do and what did they do?

✓ I'm chatting with my friends about how my day went, how I did, what I did, and what they did.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect phrasing. 'Chatting about my with my friends about' is incorrect; it should be 'chatting with my friends about'. Also, 'how is my day went' is incorrect; it should be 'how my day went' to maintain correct tense and sentence structure.

× We are chatting all of them. What about these conditions?

✓ We are chatting about all of them. What about these conditions?

The phrase 'chatting all of them' is incorrect; the preposition 'about' is needed to indicate the topic of conversation. Without 'about', the sentence is incomplete and unclear.

× I I prefer only one friend 'cause when it comes to a crowded people, nobody hears you or nobody can talk with the all of them.

✓ I prefer only one friend because when it comes to a crowd of people, nobody hears you or nobody can talk with all of them.

'A crowded people' is incorrect; 'people' is plural and does not take 'a'. The correct phrase is 'a crowd of people'. Also, 'the all of them' is incorrect; it should be 'all of them' without 'the'.

× Because of that I choose talking with one friends only.

✓ Because of that, I choose talking with one friend only.

'One friends' is incorrect because 'one' refers to singular, so the noun should be singular 'friend'.

× I'm an I'm an old old minded person who loves to chat face to face.

✓ I'm an old-minded person who loves to chat face to face.

The repetition 'I'm an I'm an' is a mistake. Also, 'old old minded' should be 'old-minded' as a compound adjective.

× I prefer face to face talking 'cause it's more I can impress myself much more than the communicate like social media.

✓ I prefer face-to-face talking because I can express myself much better than communicating through social media.

The original sentence is awkward and grammatically incorrect. 'More I can impress myself much more' is incorrect; it should be 'I can express myself much better'. Also, 'the communicate like social media' is incorrect; it should be 'communicating through social media'.

× I I don't actually argue with any people any any other friends or any other family members.

✓ I don't actually argue with any people, any other friends, or any other family members.

The repetition 'any any' is an error. Also, the sentence needs commas to separate the items in the list for clarity.