聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata agar lebih alami dan efektif. Misalnya, gunakan 'stay connected' bukan 'stay connect', dan hindari kalimat yang kurang jelas seperti 'live forward'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih ringkas dan jelas.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us stay connected and close. I often use WhatsApp or Instagram to keep in touch and see how they are doing. This way, even if we are busy or live far apart, we can maintain a strong relationship.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kata kerja yang tepat, misalnya 'make' harus 'makes'. Selain itu, gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat kalimat lebih koheren dan tambahkan detail spesifik untuk memperkaya jawaban.

示例: We usually talk about boys and our concerns about new experiences in our lives. Additionally, we discuss how our lives are progressing, such as planning to visit new places or start new activities. These conversations make me feel excited and motivated about the future.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan kosakata, serta hilangkan kata-kata pengisi seperti 'uh'. Gunakan kalimat yang jelas dan terstruktur dengan baik. Contohnya, gunakan 'I prefer chatting with only one friend rather than a group' dan jelaskan alasannya dengan kalimat yang koheren.

示例: I prefer chatting with only one friend rather than a group because I can focus better on one topic at a time. Chatting in a group makes me feel exhausted and drains my energy since I have to talk with many people.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih alami, misalnya 'it really energizes me' dan 'allows me to have natural and engaging conversations'. Gunakan kosakata yang tepat seperti 'facial expression' bukan 'fashion expression'.

示例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it really energizes me and allows me to have natural and engaging conversations. For example, when I talk with my friend in person, I can easily read their facial expressions and body language, which makes the interaction more meaningful.

建议: Perbaiki penggunaan kata dan tata bahasa, misalnya 'I do agree' harus 'I do argue' atau 'I sometimes argue'. Gunakan kata yang tepat seperti 'disagreement can be a bit frustrating' bukan 'protesting'. Perbaiki juga struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan koheren.

示例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different viewpoints, especially about what activities to do or where to go. Although disagreements can be a bit frustrating, we always try to resolve them by calmly discussing our opinions and finding a compromise that works for everyone. For instance, if we cannot agree on a place to visit, we usually take turns choosing so that everyone gets a chance to decide.

× it helps us stay connect and not feel far apart

✓ it helps us stay connected and not feel far apart

The verb 'stay' should be followed by the past participle 'connected' to form the correct adjective phrase. 'Connect' is a verb, but here an adjective is needed to describe the state.

× live forward

✓ live far away

The phrase 'live forward' is incorrect. The correct preposition to indicate distance is 'far away'.

× This conversation make me feel excited and motivated about the future

✓ This conversation makes me feel excited and motivated about the future

The subject 'conversation' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in the present tense.

× I prefer projecting only one friend than a group

✓ I prefer talking to only one friend rather than a group

The verb 'projecting' is incorrect here; 'talking to' fits the context. Also, 'than' is used for comparisons, so 'rather than' is more appropriate for preference.

× I just focusing uh to talk about something in one plan and uh talk about others in another

✓ I just focus on talking about something in one plan and talk about others in another

The verb 'focus' should be in the base form 'focus' after 'just'. Also, 'focus on' is the correct phrase.

× France chatting in a group just make me feel so exhausted and draining my energy

✓ Frankly, chatting in a group just makes me feel so exhausted and drains my energy

The subject 'chatting' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' and 'drains' to agree. Also, 'France' seems a typo for 'Frankly'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face

The phrase 'face-to-face' should be hyphenated when used as an adverb.

× it really is energized me and allows for me natural and engaging conversation

✓ it really energizes me and allows for natural and engaging conversation

The verb 'energized' is past participle; the correct present tense verb is 'energizes'. Also, 'allows for me natural' is incorrect; it should be 'allows for natural'.

× which make the interaction more meaningful

✓ which makes the interaction more meaningful

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to singular 'expression and body language' collectively, so the verb should be 'makes'.

× Yes, sometimes I do agree with my friends when we have different viewpoints

✓ Yes, sometimes I disagree with my friends when we have different viewpoints

The phrase 'do agree' contradicts the context of having different viewpoints; 'disagree' is the correct verb.

× disagreement can be a bit protesting

✓ disagreement can be a bit frustrating

The adjective 'protesting' is incorrect here; 'frustrating' correctly describes the feeling caused by disagreement.

× we always try to resolve them by calmly discussing or our opinions and finding a compromise that work for everyone

✓ we always try to resolve them by calmly discussing our opinions and finding a compromise that works for everyone

The phrase 'or our opinions' is incorrect; it should be 'our opinions'. Also, 'compromise' is singular, so the verb should be 'works'.

× if we cannot agree on place to visit

✓ if we cannot agree on a place to visit

The singular noun 'place' requires an article 'a' before it.

× we usually take turn choosing so that everyone gets a chance to decide

✓ we usually take turns choosing so that everyone gets a chance to decide

The phrase 'take turn' should be plural 'take turns' to indicate repeated action.